Topic: Two Part Tale Spin
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Sat 08/30/08 03:51 PM
Edited by myanimalcracker on Sat 08/30/08 03:51 PM
(i)

They’re there to see a poem unfolding
Where words haven’t arrived
A small underscoring of half-slept moments
Of forgetting weakness

Here we are again
Away from them
and your hands are in my hair
My face is in your chest
You smell of cigarettes and solitude
Your voice is close to my ear
in a form I know but don’t understand
This is no story you’re telling
in bare-knuckled Braille
It has a narrative I can’t follow
back to your mouth

This is the easy eye of beauty
Silence of the planets and falling starlings
in a cosmic tailspin of absurdity

The black stones under my feet are still warm
from when the sun burnt them
in the middle of the day
I wonder where I left my shoes

(ii)

Naked of meanings your face eludes me
Still the words aren’t coming
The patterns are there
lightening then darkening
The sounds amplify
bird cries swell thick
higher now
with throats full of clouds
Caught as they rise
No truth we’ve been
offered corresponds to this
These are feats of the imagination
To feathered applause and closed eyes

My skin is my mind
These are my dreams
they bring it all closer
Sink it in

Crawl up under my sheets
under a blanket of memory
warp and weft of surfaces of things
Woven threads of messages received
from every cell touched, held, imagined
Hold it, touch it again to remember
whisper into it
into the scars
into the dull ache
like a bridge from some place not located in my body

Or write it and I’ll read it to my hands
with my fingertips in a soft slow scrawl

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Sat 08/30/08 05:06 PM
powerful write animalflowerforyou :thumbsup:

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Sat 08/30/08 05:09 PM

powerful write animalflowerforyou :thumbsup:


amenflowerforyou

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Sat 08/30/08 06:22 PM
imagery under wraps. bigsmile flowerforyou

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Sat 08/30/08 06:59 PM
Thank you (((pkd flowerforyou, 1000 flowerforyou & H flowerforyou :heart:)))

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Sat 08/30/08 07:11 PM
flowerforyou nice!

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Sat 08/30/08 08:33 PM

flowerforyou nice!


Thank you, Poetic flowerforyou

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Sat 08/30/08 08:34 PM
Edited by myanimalcracker on Sat 08/30/08 08:35 PM