Topic: The Outlaw
d4tc's photo
Sat 08/30/08 12:44 PM
I ran out
guns blazing
I shot the sheriff first
he tried to jump over the
springy toddler turtle
but I got him
shot him
right in the back of his left
arm
His deputy tried to spy behind
thee ol midnight blue metal trash can
but I snapped a few rounds at him
The sherrif grabbed his heart
(not sure why)
he fell to the sand
he threw his rifle 10 feet
before yelling,
"Get that outlaw!"
I was the outlaw!
I ran up the chainy net to the wooden rooftop
of the saloon
I saw the fireman pole as a good escape
I hide behind the tube slides entrance
Over looking the monkey bars
for an alternate route
I was surrounded by sand
Alone in my rebellious way
The deputy mosey and swayed
ran out from behind the can
jumped over the springy toddler turtle
Shooting his one pistol with two hands running
I popped out from over the slide and
suppressed fire
with both guns blazing
I fired
each gun alternating
up's and down's
in synch
"so much kick for a cap gun!"
I scream
The deputy grabs his right knee hopping on one left leg
I shot him in the heart
he grabs his knee and falls between
between two swings
The deputy hollarin
"I been shot! I been shot!"
The sherrif
"Grab me rifle deputy!
I can't reach it!
I been shot in the heart!"
The outlaw pulls a pink starburst out
of his pocket and pops it in his mouth
throwing an orange one behind my shoulder
for good luck
Feet first down the slide
Guns forward
He
I
Jump out the chute
landing on my sneakers in a saddle ridin position
I pull the drawstring on my black and white
hibiscus covered boardshorts
White T&C shirt untucked
I point an gun and each of them
"Which one of you wants to die first!?"
I say
as I raise the right side of my upper lip and spit in the sand
I see fear in their eyes
Laughing phsychotically with my face toward the sky
Pointing both guns in my ears I pull the triggers
falling straight back into the sand
We lay
We laugh
We know not how serious death really is

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Sat 08/30/08 12:48 PM
I like this onebigsmile flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 08/30/08 12:51 PM
drinker

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Sat 08/30/08 12:59 PM
Alls i can do is role on the floor and laugh my pucking azz off!

d4tc's photo
Sat 08/30/08 01:06 PM

Alls i can do is role on the floor and laugh my pucking azz off!


HAHAHA! I kinda wrote this in tribute to all your cowboy poetry. I couldn't help but think of you when writing this mteagle!

Thanks for the reply! bigsmile

Also thank you

Mirror drinker and MisKim flowerforyou

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Sat 08/30/08 01:59 PM
Thank you Jason that was awsome!

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Sat 08/30/08 05:21 PM
Jason- great California tribute to the cowboy storyteller mteagle.shades :thumbsup:

mteagle-look out you'll have a whole gang of people gunning after youbigsmile

bastet126's photo
Sat 08/30/08 05:42 PM
so playful, if only life could stay this way! such a great visual! flowerforyou

PoeticMaster's photo
Sat 08/30/08 07:32 PM
laugh well done scribe! drinker

AngelLight's photo
Sun 08/31/08 09:15 AM
:laughing: rofl :laughing: rofl :laughing: rofl

Great imagination and humour Sweet J ~ flowers