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Topic: Good Bye
Ella1 Joined Fri 06/08/07 Posts: 4443	Thu 08/28/08 05:13 PM
Every night You came to me Seldom bright Faded softly. Gentle shimmer Unsure to stay A faint glimmer Slipping away. Haunting mist creeps I see you there Broken heart weeps Real, unaware. Lost memory Forever gone Struggle to see To hear your song. Every night You came to me No more tonight Gone completely.

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AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 08/29/08 04:43 AM
Beautifully poignant.

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Fri 08/29/08 04:47 AM
a nice write of ur emotions ella Every night You came to me Seldom bright Faded softly. Gentle shimmer Unsure to stay A faint glimmer Slipping away. Haunting mist creeps I see you there Broken heart weeps Real, unaware. Lost memory Forever gone Struggle to see To hear your song. Every night You came to me No more tonight Gone completely.

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