On
Scorched
Charred
Drinking at
a Bar
A Band
About to be
banned
Barred
A fight
A drink
A night
over a drink
to think
Over drink
Under a table
Mouth slurs
Words curve
wish my pillow
was that curb

That taste was
bad confidence
too dense
too tense
to dance
without fists
pumping
feet jumping

Bar tender
Not so tender
Rendered evilness
Not the evilest

Checked
Bounce
Bouncer
Bouncing
Houndering Me
Forearms tucked
Dismountling
Pounding Me
Grounding Me
Sounding Me
and the Band
Off

Why are you arresting me? I didnt want to be drunk in public i want to be drunk in the bar! Arrest them for throwing me into public!

You caught the Tater!

Nice, J

That's TATER SALAD!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks Kat and pkd for the comments.

mteagle!

That's my Mom's all time favorite comedian!

I'm buying tickets for us when he comes back to Cali.

Kinda bummed I never saw George Carlin. O'well I need to see when Bill Cosby is performing before it's too late. Geez, I almost forgot about Bernie Mac. Never got to see him either.

I love going to comedy clubs. Just a fun night. Especially when it's not all blue material and crowd heckling. Not fond of comedians who do nothing in their act but heckle the crowd.

Degrading someone with sly sleud sarcastic remarks to make yourself feel better about not having a good act is not my cup of grean tea. lol! That sounded bitter in a good, I got my point across, kinda way.