Topic: Forseeing
myanimalcracker's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:05 PM
This body is not fit for modeling

there bits that hang

and places that sag

for life has left a mark

that lingers

reminds me of who I am

I am not rare beauty

I am that most common of packaging

and I am not at all sorry

for I prefer my soul common

and clean

My gaze, if you pause long

reveals that which shines truly

my beauty, I hope

revealed within my souls

most quiet dignity

I may not at first glance

be much to stir a heart

but what heart would love truly

that loves so quickly?

I would prefer that which takes

unearthing to discover

no photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:10 PM
Your poems flow like water, and are so clear....flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:11 PM
such beauty as this
comes in many delightful packages
i do not seek wrapping paper
over a chunk of coal
your jewel shine has no body
which looks beautiful
so beautiful to me

:heart: flowerforyou

(((myanimalc)))

:heart: flowerforyou

beauty314's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:12 PM
flowerforyou excellentflowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:14 PM
bigsmile :heart:

myanimalcracker's photo
Wed 08/27/08 11:38 PM
Thank you so much

Up flowerforyou
s1ow flowerforyou
beauty flowerforyou
J :heart: flowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Thu 08/28/08 04:00 AM
so beautiful and so true flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 08/28/08 05:20 AM
such truths you write animal:smile: flowerforyou flowerforyou

mteagle31's photo
Thu 08/28/08 06:33 AM
True beauty comes from the inside and yours is shining through!

myanimalcracker's photo
Thu 08/28/08 10:08 AM
Thank you

bastet flowerforyou
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