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Topic: the breaking moon
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Wed 08/27/08 05:52 PM Edited by jimz on Wed 08/27/08 05:54 PM
the machine in the breaking moon the metal rhyme the steel beam dug in oil gushes the built universe rebuilt and it gets smal ler tons of heaping steel weights sinking now the horses are wooden and the angel writes poems let us be baptized in the moving over laying waters pure and deep reaching within

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 08/27/08 05:54 PM
Good evening {{{Jimmy}}}

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 08/27/08 05:55 PM
that was nice jimz

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Wed 08/27/08 07:08 PM
Wonderful, jimz!

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 08/27/08 09:41 PM
(((Jimmy)))wonderful

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 08/27/08 11:18 PM


LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 08/28/08 08:50 PM
((( Jimmy ))))

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 08/28/08 08:52 PM
nice write my friend

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