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Topic: The Stuff Ghosts Are Made Of
myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Wed 08/27/08 01:45 PM
Mirror images of myself in the warm guise of relations past; I bestowed upon so many of you honor where there was none, love where you gave none. It wasn’t fair, and I know this now, to expect to find a healing touch from your make-believe hands. Ghosts, no, as you never were. Reflections, more aptly projections of my naked weaknesses, my unvoiced truths. You were more to me in absence than you ever were sleeping beside me.

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Wed 08/27/08 01:49 PM


SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Wed 08/27/08 02:00 PM
Actually, I understand this only too well. Very good writing.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 08/27/08 02:05 PM
that feeling where we feel more alone laying next to someone then if we were sleeping by ourselves-wonderfully expressed animal

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Wed 08/27/08 02:37 PM
Thank you (((flame , SKPCG , pkd )))

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Wed 08/27/08 03:23 PM
poignant lesson you teach yourself phantoms smile drifting away "i like that"

Sweet_and_Sassy Joined Fri 07/06/07 Posts: 217	Wed 08/27/08 03:27 PM
I love it....

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Wed 08/27/08 03:31 PM
Very nice write...

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 08/27/08 03:39 PM
Potent - very well done!

Pete026 Joined Sun 10/14/07 Posts: 14799	Wed 08/27/08 03:40 PM
Fantastic This'd make excellent lyrics

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Wed 08/27/08 04:01 PM
Thank you Harold Sweet Up Different Pete

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 08/27/08 05:54 PM
hey every body else already said it Good write girl

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Thu 08/28/08 04:46 PM
Thank you (((1000)))

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 08/28/08 08:45 PM
very well done

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