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Peering through my looking glass
in a rare and crystal clear moment of deep and painful introspection harsh inspection and sharp dissection my reflection mirrors a life fraught with shattered and elusive dreams lost or left scattered in the remnants of my own self gratifications …. I’ve given little to the men who would love me and ...everything … … to the men who would not … I’ve been absorbed by my own insanities vanities and desperate salvation often neglecting those who would love me without thought or reservation losing myself somewhere in the process … And now here I find myself stripped naked and standing on shaky uncertain ground as I look at you looking back at me Seeing all that I was … … all that I am … … and all … …I could and ...would be … … with you … Bared cruelly and unmercifully are these reflections in my looking glass staring back at my face through wounded wary yet hopeful eyes … ...questioning .. wondering .. Asking silently … Will you Love what you see when you see that it’s me… staring back ….at you… ... staring back ... ... at me ...? |
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Thought it was fine the way it was but I do understand your want to tinker.
Nice write Alicia as always |
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even more wonderful than before...
 
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nice wiz,
a soft i feel in it Peering through my looking glass in a rare and crystal clear moment of deep and painful introspection harsh inspection and sharp dissection my reflection mirrors a life fraught with shattered and elusive dreams lost or left scattered in the remnants of my own self gratifications …. I’ve given little to the men who would love me and ...everything … … to the men who would not … I’ve been absorbed by my own insanities vanities and desperate salvation often neglecting those who would love me without thought or reservation losing myself somewhere in the process … And now here I find myself stripped naked and standing on shaky uncertain ground as I look at you looking back at me Seeing all that I was … … all that I am … … and all … …I could and ...would be … … with you … Bared cruelly and unmercifully are these reflections in my looking glass staring back at my face through wounded wary yet hopeful eyes … ...questioning .. wondering .. Asking silently … Will you Love what you see when you see that it’s me… staring back ….at you… ... staring back ... ... at me ...? |
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Excellent revision.
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Thank you friends. I think I'm done playing with it now. *smile*
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Absolutely beautiful! Your choice to honestly look within will bring you everything you've ever dreamed of and more
Thumbsup girlfriend 
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very nice write
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AWESOME WRITE.........
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Amazing, MsWiz
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Absolutely beautiful! Your choice to honestly look within will bring you everything you've ever dreamed of and more Thumbsup girlfriend Thank you my Angelface How are you doing darling?
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very nice write Thank you Cutie
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AWESOME WRITE......... I appreciate the comment Up
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Amazing, MsWiz Thank you sweet girl, has anybody told you how lovely that new picture is?
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Amazing, MsWiz Thank you sweet girl, has anybody told you how lovely that new picture is?  Thank you, sweets
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((( Alicia )))) Hello Lovely one,,,
Such Purity within your Eyes
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Amazing, MsWiz Thank you sweet girl, has anybody told you how lovely that new picture is? Thank you, sweets
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((( Alicia )))) Hello Lovely one,,, Such Purity within your Eyes <<----sending love and smooches to her friend ((((DENISE)))
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When I look into my looking glass I do not see me.
I am invisible with but a vibrent red beating heart. Suspended in mid-air, floating, showing, its alive. Giving all who seek it out, parts to them, to keep. What is to become of its last mortal taste. Feeling all my giving a total waste. To disolve into all that was at-that-time. To reflecting nothing back, not even a rhyme. Good poem Miss Wiz....wink.  
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