There's a pain in my heart
where you used to be. When
you left me that day you
put a hole in my heart.
I dream of you and wake
with the sadness of
having lost you.

Moving on is hard i'm
ready to love again
but can't let go. I
want to hear your voice,
hold you and kiss you
but your not her for me.

I feel like if i see you
again and that your happy
I can move on. We were
lovers once but overnight
it seems like we became
strangers. The fire you
had is gone. I hope you
find happiness that i
couldn't give you

Please don't criticize too much. I haven't wrote a poem for a while.

valo,,,
This is really Beautiful, yet so very sad,,,

this is very good!!!
HELLO LA MOM!!

WOW WHAT A GREAT POEM.IT REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART...I HOPE YOU MET THE
PERSON OF YOUR DREAMS......GOD BLESS

Thanks everyone. I didn't think it was that good. But the saying is the
worst critic is yourself.

Valo,It was very good. I've felt that pain too,I hope yours does pass.

Very nice