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Topic: Toady
evilpoetess Joined Tue 08/26/08 Posts: 53	Tue 08/26/08 04:25 PM
Toady hops when master speaks It never is a bother She loves him like her long-lost kin A brother, or a father She thinks his wisdom conquers all She loves the way he speaks He gives her all the confidence And self-esteem she seeks She trusts his loyalty to her She knows he’d never harm her If she knew him like I do I think it would alarm her I will not enlighten her I will not burst her bubble But when he shows his real face Hoo-boy, will there be trouble

Lily0923 Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 20429	Tue 08/26/08 04:38 PM
That's wonderful, reminds me of alot of people I know.

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Tue 08/26/08 06:22 PM
sht, who's holding the poison apple nice write

evilpoetess Joined Tue 08/26/08 Posts: 53	Wed 08/27/08 09:49 AM
Thank you both. No posion apples, though! Just bad ones.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 08/27/08 11:32 AM
Nice. Good Flow.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 08/27/08 05:48 PM
I know a toad who is just a giant wart in life... (Sorry was just venting about a toad I know)

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 08/27/08 06:08 PM
Tell me are you keeping it to yourself to save argument or are you looking forward to the explosion. Sorry just playing because of your name evilpoetess

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Wed 08/27/08 07:10 PM
I loved this. Very nice write!

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