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Topic: The chopping block
Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Mon 08/25/08 07:05 PM
The chopping block I lay myself out full surrender fully open Looking into your eyes for the hope the reciprocation My world holds it's breath will you love me too? Will you see? Your eyes drop your face scowls difficulty grows As your words come out slow trying not to hurt Unfitting Timing Life Again........ I survive the chopping block. bc 08/25/08

JoLynn Joined Sun 10/07/07 Posts: 516	Mon 08/25/08 07:06 PM
Well written...and it fits my life

crm1068 Joined Thu 07/17/08 Posts: 1000	Mon 08/25/08 07:08 PM


Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Mon 08/25/08 07:16 PM Edited by Dragoness on Mon 08/25/08 07:17 PM
I'm sorry Jol, you saw the word survive in there though I hope Thanks for reading Jol and CRM

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 08/25/08 09:46 PM
((( Hugs ))))

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 08/25/08 09:49 PM
(((Dragoness))) so simply beautiful this sacrifice of you

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 08/25/08 10:08 PM
very nice write dragoness well done

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 08/26/08 12:02 AM
Good Write.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Tue 08/26/08 05:10 AM


AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 08/26/08 10:26 AM
Powerful write....(((your))) words are heartfelt.

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Wed 08/27/08 12:02 PM
Thanks LA, slow, kc, d4, 1001, angel for reading, I appreciate your words

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 08/27/08 12:46 PM
Owie and (duck y'all) B-L-A-S-T towards a Maryland field needing a controlled burn!

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