Topic: Tied & Gloom
d4tc's photo
Mon 08/25/08 01:25 PM
You say a marriage is great
Wait
Let's debate
Look at your mate
Sitting next to you
despising you
eyes in view
of everything
disregarding you
loathing you
could be holding you
If he wasn't
hardening you
How about you?
Does this make you satisfied?

or is this a fabrication
manifested into a lie?

Askew
His view
Your view
(behind the make up)
Same views
Askewed
No new news
no destination
in formation
of pace'n
moping
hardly coping
saulking
in
blue shoes
Who knew
the happiness
would fade
could've have made
for better days
had things
never changed

yet all things
change

not everything
makes cents

From George W.
to George W.

Red
White
&
fenced

myanimalcracker's photo
Mon 08/25/08 01:27 PM
Very nice, Jason... :heart: flowerforyou

CharmaineCharmaine's photo
Mon 08/25/08 01:29 PM
Another poetic.
I myself write poetry. Maybe we should talk about our poetry.
Yours is beautiful and even though you write it for yourself it is nice to have it appreciated.
x

SmurfyPoet292721's photo
Mon 08/25/08 01:39 PM
awesome write i've read a few of yours and you're talented keep it up

flame1cutie's photo
Mon 08/25/08 01:41 PM
flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Mon 08/25/08 02:21 PM
Thanks for the replies. flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

Very flattering Smurf and Charmaine. blushing

no photo
Mon 08/25/08 03:25 PM
Well done my friend!

CharmaineCharmaine's photo
Tue 08/26/08 08:00 AM

Thanks for the replies. flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

Very flattering Smurf and Charmaine. blushing

I got special love...

You made me a very happy woman.

When are you back online

xx