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Topic: What to call this poem?
shortiemix Joined Wed 08/20/08 Posts: 69	Thu 08/21/08 07:56 PM
Are you too scared to love? Because everyone you get close to leaves. I am. Is it hard to see the future? Because you are living in the past. I do. Are you afraid to wake up in the morning? Because you feel so empty inside? That's me. Who is in that mirror? You hate yourself. Don't look. Afraid to follow your dreams? Because someone told you, That you aren't worthy. Chase them. ~~~~~Feedback and can someone help me name these poems?

Etrain Joined Wed 11/21/07 Posts: 19684	Thu 08/21/08 07:58 PM
very nice

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Thu 08/21/08 08:02 PM
This one should be called "Inside"

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Thu 08/21/08 08:08 PM
i'd be tempted to call it "scared to love"

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 08/21/08 08:14 PM Edited by LAMom on Thu 08/21/08 08:33 PM
Silently you search your soul,, Don't hide let your beauty fly Wonderful,,

Buckingfored Joined Fri 11/02/07 Posts: 33	Thu 08/21/08 08:15 PM
That is one awesome poem. Truly. As for a title, how about "Victim of life", "Afraid", "Fearless", or "Damaged goods"?

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 08/21/08 08:16 PM
i'd be tempted to call it "scared to love" or maybe some form of "hide"

popcornncoke Joined Fri 11/02/07 Posts: 2088	Thu 08/21/08 08:32 PM
I'm not sure what to name it.But it says what I feel inside. it was wonderful.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Thu 08/21/08 08:38 PM
or "chase"

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Fri 08/22/08 08:08 AM
Survey (ing the Past)

kojack Joined Mon 12/25/06 Posts: 16382	Fri 08/22/08 08:14 AM
"The Inner Me" "Deep in My Soul" " If You Only Knew" "The Real Me"

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