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Edited by
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grow wings
and shelter your friends feel them lift you into the air have vision see beyond these useless eyes watch barriers dissolve a road mirage escape nowhere and run where emptiness swallows fleeing ego, self and pride finding peace soaring with clarity and confidence |
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That is a great solid statement...
Could almost feel my friends and I being lifted up!! |
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![]() That is a great solid statement... Could almost feel my friends and I being lifted up!! |
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nice
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You have talent. I love this poem. I am waiting for more.
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Wonderful write (((H)))
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I really like this SH...thank you
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oh thanks everbody...
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<<<<<<<<<<<<< Sittin on a stump just outside the gateway to an incredible Garden,, such purity,, such devine purity..
Whispersssss softly,, Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm Yes i see ![]() ![]() |
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grow wings and shelter your friends feel them lift you into the air have vision see beyond these useless eyes watch barriers dissolve a road mirage escape nowhere and run where emptiness swallows fleeing ego, self and pride finding peace soaring with clarity and confidence It's a special place to be privvy to someone's PERSONAL growth. ![]() ![]() |
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Edited by
ak0
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Fri 08/22/08 02:05 PM
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feeling the need to revisit some earlier thoughts...
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grow wings and shelter your friends feel them lift you into the air have vision see beyond these useless eyes watch barriers dissolve a road mirage escape nowhere and run where emptiness swallows fleeing ego, self and pride finding peace soaring with clarity and confidence Why have I not seen this before? I love the last stanza.....escape nowhere.... |
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![]() can't read em all! ![]() |
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![]() can't read em all! ![]() Oh yeah? Watch me... (INSERTING KISSIE FACE HERE0 |
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Slow, I'm so glad you felt that urge, had the need, whatever you wanna call it. I truly enjoy your perspectives and ahhhhh, this is so worth revisiting again and again and again ("to infinity and be-YOND"). Errrr, ummmm, can ya tell I really like it?
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