I want to see more limbs lost....

ok. explain it again..i think i missed something lasttime.

ok

Each player is to tell a story of how they lost their limb to save another one of their limbs, or just how they lost a limb

a player/post above should have posted a suggested limb, which the next poster can use

ok.
i lost my eyeball by being attacked by a posessed pencil

ummm..i suggest a nose.
hows that?

Your score.....4/10

(Im sry...Im a bit harsh on the scoring, but 4/10 is the average)


If you like, I can give an example, if you would like to see one

yes, i would

My hands became cold in the winter breeze. I closed the windows and doors. I found a quilt and decided to lay down for a bit. I woke to aloud sound of glass breaking. I looked out and saw a few kids running off down the block. The cold began to rub against my bones and making me almost stiff. I went to the kitchen and turned the stove on to warm myself. It worked for a bit, then got closer to feel more warmth. My bell rang a startled me and me face came dangerously close but before I fell into the fire I jumped back and hit against the shelf behind me. A rack of knives feel but stayed only made a hole in my pants. As I attempted to stand up holding to the self, another knife feel cutting a cord to my iron and the iron making contact and burning and crushing my nose.



Right arm

i sat in class watching as the other students followed the example on the board. they all seemed to be having no problems...but they didnt have the pencil i did.

i picked up the round yellow pencil with caution, i knew what it could do. at first it seemed ok, at i sighed in relief. maybe i could actually do the assignment.

*do it*
a voice sounded in my head.

ithad started again.
i shut my eyes and continued writing. i wouldnt let it win this time.

*DO IT*

i shuddered. the voice became louder, more demanding. my hand shook as the pencil took on a will of its own.

we struggled as i tried not to attract notice, but it was o no avail, soon we fell to the floor, the pencil controling my hand, my other arm trying to break my limb free of the possessed impliment, then suddenly my body froze and my hand rose high in the air, landing the pencil in my eye, my face a bloody shell.

nose.

hows that?

Your score....7/10


Very nice ^^

oooo yay.

ty.

^^

I liked that one

very interesting


^^

as i lay beneath a cloudless sky,near the roots of ancient Joshua tree, i fell into a deep slumber.

the sound of my snoring alerted a nearby spotted night snake.

it slithered , ever, closer to my dimming campfire.

as it neared my face, with mouth agape, coiled, ready to strike.

as quick as lightning i grabbed my machete and struck the snake, severing its nose cleanly.





left leg from just below the knee...

Hello GodFather ^^



Your score...6/10 ^^


Yours is also very interesting