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Topic: Crack
myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Sat 08/16/08 02:45 PM
when you are gone i feel as though i will crack in half these hot summer nights tease me with thoughts of you: your heat your warm places i fear you will not return you will go astray i wait among ghosts and remain faithful from the third floor, i watch for your return

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 08/16/08 02:46 PM
nice

1956deluxe Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 8559	Sat 08/16/08 02:46 PM


SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Sat 08/16/08 02:47 PM
That was good!!

IamMewhoRU Joined Tue 11/27/07 Posts: 5814	Sat 08/16/08 02:47 PM
wow.......I don't know wether yo tell you I'm sorry or oooooh baby

Cavatica Joined Thu 07/31/08 Posts: 305	Sat 08/16/08 02:50 PM
So full of longing, sadly beautiful. Wonderfully written Myanimalcracker

wraithme66 Joined Wed 11/21/07 Posts: 1909	Sat 08/16/08 02:55 PM
Marry me!

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Sat 08/16/08 02:56 PM
Thank you: Mirror 1956 SKPCG IamMe (a little bit of both, maybe? lol) Cavatica

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Sat 08/16/08 02:56 PM
Marry me! lol...ok!

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 08/16/08 09:02 PM
the wait the longing for someone we really shouldn't desire to return in my case anyway very emotion filled and awesome myanimalcracker

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