Topic: All Night
myanimalcracker's photo
Sat 08/16/08 09:49 AM
Imagine you dive into time and you lay
Motionless on your back. You
Stare at the dark sky above you and
Obsess over the facts. Which
Are so vague you want to cry, your wild
Nights will haunt you. You’re playing a
Game with yourself, when you
Really don’t want to.

You try to place yourself there, where you mumbled those
Words, but it all seems so
Irrelevant now
That your whole body hurts. You can’t
Have him like this, leaving stretch
Marks on your soul. You can’t
Entrap him like this, with your
Integrity on parole. You
Can float here
All night, wrinkle your skin with
Negligence, but who do you
Think is winning this fight when you’re
Busy swimming in the past tense?

Rise from these waters
It’s okay to be unclothed
No one cares for your facade or the
Glorious endings that you wrote…things are
Messy right now with
Your heart beating loud, but you’ll make it through
Somehow if you can just climb out…out of this
Emptiness and back into
Life, which has been waiting
For you, worried sick
Tonight. Crawl
Out of your head when it’s
This possessed, look
Around for a towel and get your
Little body dressed.

Keep your moonlight lap
Tucked away where you can later look it
Over
Your spirit is
Over there, waiting to
Understand the explanation that you owe her

Invisibleghost's photo
Sat 08/16/08 10:10 AM
Wow was great I had to read it twice very good stuff ...

s1owhand's photo
Sat 08/16/08 10:28 AM
Rêve de Fenêtre

nighttime when the demons come out to play
on minds playground - idle minds
stream with a thousand goblin-child
on black sheets of thought glittering with red flickering stars

tangled fantasy of bedsheets and tears
hijacked by imaginations' nemesis
the jail of hearts steel cage
my soul laughs at this prison yard

ceci n'etait jamais une porte
il n'y a aucune fenêtre
ni maison chez moi

je suis ton ciel, mon rêve
departons-nous tuer pour amour

myanimalcracker's photo
Sat 08/16/08 11:34 AM
Thank you (((Invisible flowerforyou & s1ow flowerforyou)))

no photo
Sat 08/16/08 12:13 PM
One of your best, your writing gets better and better. I could definately relate to this. Amazing poem.:smile: :heart: flowerforyou

myanimalcracker's photo
Sat 08/16/08 01:13 PM

One of your best, your writing gets better and better. I could definately relate to this. Amazing poem.:smile: :heart: flowerforyou


Aw, thank you (((pkd))) :heart: flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Sat 08/16/08 02:14 PM
very nice both of you