Topic: Brutal Perfection
myanimalcracker's photo
Mon 08/11/08 05:02 PM
Misanthropes and masochists, life beckons,
listless but enthusiastic, she makes her move,
the emptiness overwhelms her lust.

Enchanted eyes which glow under the moonlight,
passionate empathy, long suffering sympathy,
she loses faith but keeps hope near.

Utterly hopeless in this game of romance,
like a ballet who refuses to dance,
a wizard with no wisdom to speak of.

Tainted daggers and unstrung harps,
this torrential downpour falls on,
her Eternal passion backs down.

Impeccable love portrayed,
Brutal affection delayed,
Waited, and she waited for his subtle escape.

Ambivalent lust, fleeting love,
Her vulnerability tells tales, her perfection sparks miracles,
a silent whimper, a careless whisper,
beneath her impeccable exterior, an accidental love dwells.

writer_gurl's photo
Mon 08/11/08 05:05 PM
flowerforyou Awww, very nice flowerforyou

30andbored's photo
Mon 08/11/08 05:06 PM
:wink:

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Mon 08/11/08 05:20 PM
Interesting write, many thoughts and questions come to mind. your inspiration, they must be something....smokin

myanimalcracker's photo
Mon 08/11/08 05:29 PM

Interesting write, many thoughts and questions come to mind. your inspiration, they must be something....smokin


They are, in fact, quite something.
Thank you for your comment, as always Master flowerforyou

also, thank you (((writer and 30))) flowerforyou flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Mon 08/11/08 06:26 PM
heartfelt flowerforyou

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Mon 08/11/08 06:30 PM

Interesting write, many thoughts and questions come to mind. your inspiration, they must be something....smokin

my exact thoughtsdrinker

myanimalcracker's photo
Mon 08/11/08 11:47 PM
Thank you (((s1ow flowerforyou & 1000 flowerforyou)))

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Tue 08/12/08 07:12 AM
'Enchanted eyes which glow under the moonlight,
passionate empathy, long suffering sympathy,
she loses faith but keeps hope near.'

Beautiful visual here darlin' :heart:

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Tue 08/12/08 10:13 AM
very nice, love the last stanza:smile: flowerforyou