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Tell me what you think of the poetry on my page. Seriously, I have had work published in books before, but before I submit these, it would be nice to have some honest feedback....
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Edited by
patty52
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Mon 08/11/08 02:03 PM
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Your poetry is good....Thank You
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Very talented....
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Tell me what you think of the poetry on my page. Seriously, I have had work published in books before, but before I submit these, it would be nice to have some honest feedback.... Good for you! Want a cookie? |
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i like it .... oh yeah can you hook me up with glasses i had to squint alot...
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Tell me what you think of the poetry on my page. Seriously, I have had work published in books before, but before I submit these, it would be nice to have some honest feedback.... Good for you! Want a cookie? Probably not, but I do  
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Robbie - Congratulations - it was beautiful, and it touched me deeply......I am certainly no expert, but I feel you are off to a good start.......Keep it up and I look forward to reading more of your poetry on JSH!!
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Nice writing!
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Mon 08/11/08 07:40 PM
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Tell me what you think of the poetry on my page. Seriously, I have had work published in books before, but before I submit these, it would be nice to have some honest feedback.... It's a little too much HallMark Religious Card for my particular taste, but I can certainly see how many others would enjoy and take pleasure in it. Keep writing. |
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