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d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sat 08/09/08 09:43 AM
I need a woman who will put me in my place A woman who will rearrange my face A woman who will take charge and let me lead A woman who loves herself so she can love me A woman who can talk my ears off A woman who speaks firm, yet sounds soft A woman who says, "smiling is my favorite!" A woman who will put pumps on when she is naked A woman who always makes me laugh A woman who brings out my better half A woman who is not down in the dumps A woman who knows exactly! what she wants! A woman who loves from not head but her heart A woman who tries not to just fit the part A woman who is more than just words A woman who does more than just flirt A woman who pleases me everytime A woman who knows how to make me shine A woman who captivates me to give her my all A woman who gives me a good enough reason to fall

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Sat 08/09/08 09:45 AM
Nice write

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sat 08/09/08 09:46 AM Edited by d4tc on Sat 08/09/08 09:46 AM
thank you flame1cutie

mekikis Joined Thu 05/01/08 Posts: 229	Sat 08/09/08 09:56 AM
Nice writeup

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Sat 08/09/08 11:20 AM
Awwww now to find a man that is all that well without the pumps lmao good write.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sat 08/09/08 02:21 PM
Awwww now to find a man that is all that well without the pumps lmao good write. Thanks for the replies. TxsGal mekikis flame1cutie

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 08/09/08 02:24 PM
"A woman who loves herself, so she can love me" never a truer line spoken, same goes for men

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Sun 08/10/08 04:12 PM Edited by jimz on Sun 08/10/08 04:27 PM
I need a woman who will put me in my place A woman who will rearrange my face A woman who will take charge and let me lead A woman who loves herself so she can love me A woman who can talk my ears off A woman who speaks firm, yet sounds soft A woman who says, "smiling is my favorite!" A woman who will put pumps on when she is naked A woman who always makes me laugh A woman who brings out my better half A woman who is not down in the dumps A woman who knows exactly! what she wants! A woman who loves from not head but her heart A woman who tries not to just fit the part A woman who is more than just words A woman who does more than just flirt A woman who pleases me everytime A woman who knows how to make me shine A woman who captivates me to give her my all A woman who gives me a good enough reason to fall

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 08/10/08 04:24 PM
Good write man...

CantonGal Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 124	Sun 08/10/08 06:10 PM
Nice write

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 08/10/08 07:18 PM
I need a woman who will put me in my place A woman who will rearrange my face A woman who will take charge and let me lead A woman who loves herself so she can love me A woman who can talk my ears off A woman who speaks firm, yet sounds soft A woman who says, "smiling is my favorite!" A woman who will put pumps on when she is naked A woman who always makes me laugh A woman who brings out my better half A woman who is not down in the dumps A woman who knows exactly! what she wants! A woman who loves from not head but her heart A woman who tries not to just fit the part A woman who is more than just words A woman who does more than just flirt A woman who pleases me everytime A woman who knows how to make me shine A woman who captivates me to give her my all A woman who gives me a good enough reason to fall And you shall have all this and more Sweet J....

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sun 08/10/08 07:59 PM
Thank you all! Angel Canton Iam4u Jimz pkd