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Edited by
Sharris
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Fri 08/08/08 10:23 AM
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Pebble
Serendipitous, this find, a pebble on the beach. Washed and hiding in plain sight, amongst the sea weed, reach. You will not know the treasure. A map, is all that's seen. You must dig and pace the trails, a depth that you will glean. Friendship will uncover, more than just a stone. Smooth to hold and fits just right, in the palm of your soul's own. Raine Les 8/08/2008 |
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Very nice
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I agree very nice.
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Simple and plain can go forever unseen, but when found! Moving you greatly, in Ahhh. Without even making a sound. Over-looked by never seeing, til your eyes magnified its beauty. Nice poem... |
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Simple and plain can go forever unseen, but when found! Moving you greatly, in Ahhh. Without even making a sound. Over-looked by never seeing, til your eyes magnified its beauty. Nice poem... Beautiful response, thank you |
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Very nice Thank you, it is good seeing you, lately |
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I agree very nice. Lately , you heart has spoken such deep and intense expressions..certainly, a woman takes notice. Thank you. |
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