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Tear
His tear will find the river. It flows and will not cease. Floating over rocks, Death's rapids will release. Cascading from the falls, And pooling in the deep. His tear has found a place, Safe haven for soul's keep. Raine Les 8/7/2008 |
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I like that too
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Wow..
That was really great. It seemed like it could have been gone into even more, but the length - how short it was - it just came out amazingly. I really like that. =] <3 |
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Amazing
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