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Topic: Rush
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 08/07/08 03:28 AM
The rush of you came over me like the rush of an ocean's wave. I stood still, taking in the majesty of you. The cool breeze against my face filled every precious space within me. I could feel you surround me; I could feel you beside me; I could feel you inside me; I could feel you arise in me, and then gently descend. Yes, like an ocean's wave you rise and fall before me in synchronicity, with consistency, and in harmony you marvelously remind me of Love's constant ways, of Love's endless waves. I breathe you in and I breathe in tenderness, awareness, gentleness, fullness, gladness, happiness. You fill me with endless sensations and I am prepared to Love you as deeply as your ocean's depth for I am left without words, only the knowing of my Soul. JDS 08/07/08

Peccy Joined Thu 06/28/07 Posts: 17181	Thu 08/07/08 03:38 AM
Nice write dear!

crazysillygirl Joined Mon 01/29/07 Posts: 4869	Thu 08/07/08 03:38 AM
that was wonderful.....

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 08/07/08 03:56 AM
Nice write dear! Ty Peccy....here's to your love story!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 08/07/08 03:57 AM
that was wonderful..... Nice to meet you crazysilly ~ Ty for your kind word and flower....

kristone Joined Sat 04/05/08 Posts: 99	Thu 08/07/08 04:25 AM
very nice

passionart Joined Fri 04/27/07 Posts: 1396	Thu 08/07/08 04:36 AM
Very fortunate you have arrived...

ddn122 Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 12855	Thu 08/07/08 04:46 AM
I stood still, taking in the majesty of you.

reason4everything Joined Fri 05/09/08 Posts: 45	Thu 08/07/08 05:04 AM
beautiful

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Thu 08/07/08 05:14 AM
lovely, good write.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Thu 08/07/08 06:14 AM
So, so beautiful. I hope we all know this kind of love sometime in our lives.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Thu 08/07/08 06:22 AM
"i like that"

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 08/07/08 06:57 AM
kristone and passion, so nice to meet you. ty for your comments.... (((ddn)))you are always so sweet, lol reason Mystique pkd s1ow ty all for reading and commenting. i am grateful for the Love

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 08/07/08 05:25 PM
Adjectively speaking, that was most beautiful, illustrious, perfectly worded write you have written sweetie. The majesty of it was absorbing.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Fri 08/08/08 07:24 AM
Beautiful write!! I love it!!

iraceslowcars Joined Sat 11/17/07 Posts: 5776	Fri 08/08/08 08:00 AM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 08/08/08 02:19 PM
Scented aromas after our love, bestills the overwelming passions rushing with-in our souls. And the fluttering nerves still a tingle..Just a kiss and hush, absorbing US! GREAT write girl!!!!!!

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Fri 08/08/08 02:36 PM
The rush of you came over me like the rush of an ocean's wave. I stood still, taking in the majesty of you. The cool breeze against my face filled every precious space within me. I could feel you surround me; I could feel you beside me; I could feel you inside me; I could feel you arise in me, and then gently descend. Yes, like an ocean's wave you rise and fall before me in synchronicity, with consistency, and in harmony you marvelously remind me of Love's constant ways, of Love's endless waves. I breathe you in and I breathe in tenderness, awareness, gentleness, fullness, gladness, happiness. You fill me with endless sensations and I am prepared to Love you as deeply as your ocean's depth for I am left without words, only the knowing of my Soul. JDS 08/07/08

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Fri 08/08/08 02:50 PM
Nice

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 08/08/08 02:57 PM
Adjectively speaking, that was most beautiful, illustrious, perfectly worded write you have written sweetie. The majesty of it was absorbing. Awesome....ty for that Robert!