I haven't got the music recorded yet, but this is a song I've been working on.




Stop & Stare (Lyrics)
Twilight's Twin
4-2008©




He ran his fingers
through my hair...

He looked at me
as IF he cared...

and all I could do~
is STOP and STARE


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He ran the chills
right down my spine...

He said he was
my "VALENTINE"...

and all I could do~
is STOP and STARE

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The NECKLACE...
you bought ME...
is BROKEN,
I put it away

The LETTER...
you wrote ME...
is CRUMBLED,
I THREW IT AWAY!

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**********************

He ran his fingers
through my hair...

He looked at me
as IF he cared...

and all I could do~
is STOP and STARE

***

He left me speechless
he left me a FOOL...

He broke my heart
without a CLUE...

and all I could do~
is STOP and STARE

**********************
**********************

The NECKLACE...
you bought ME...
is BROKEN,
I put it away

The LETTER...
you wrote ME...
is CRUMBLED,
I THREW IT AWAY!


The LIES...
That you told ME...
Are OVER,
Im LEAVING today!


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**********************

This girl has LEFT
I'm HEADING out...

I had a SMILE
instead of POUT...

and all YOU could do~
is STOP and STARE.

It's good. How about "I can't see, I just stare"? I know, Pearl Jam. Later>

Very good

Good one would love to hear it once you put it to music

"i like that"

Thanks guys!

I have the guitar recorded, I just got to get the vocals down now.