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MsWizard
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Fri 08/01/08 06:23 AM
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Ok you guys. I'm working on a piece right now based on a challenge "The Core of a Woman" and it occured to me that nobody is really going to do it better or through more interesting eyes than a man. So you male poets? How about it. Here's your challenge:
What makes a woman a woman? Write about the Core of a Woman. Mesmerize us.  OK LET ME CLARIFY~THIS HAS TO BE IN POEM FORM~  Have fun!
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Fantastic idea MsWiz...this should be a wonderful thread....Bring it on guys!
 
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pleads the 5th :D
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Id have to say the smell and touch of a woman is something that makes a true woman but first and foremost they hav2 be sexy on the inside. Outward beauty is just the icing on the cake babe!
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a heart of gold something cold mysterious yet dark something i hold till i live no more she is a mother she is my love she is everthing i want and need but everything i fear she is always the one to bring my eye's to tear with everthing that hearts her so oh how i wish we two could grow old she is clean and polite something every man wants but cant cause she is mine every night crazy in love with what she is she stole my heart that i did not mean to give this to me is what a women is not a thing but a person always changeing always diffrent but always the same when i need her by my side even when im wrong i know she will always be there by my side.
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Hmmm, the right genitalia indicative of being female and the age of maturation considered to be "adult" = Woman
 
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Fantastic idea MsWiz...this should be a wonderful thread....Bring it on guys! Thanks for having my back AngelFace
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pleads the 5th :D Oh come on, dont be a wuss! 
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Id have to say the smell and touch of a woman is something that makes a true woman but first and foremost they hav2 be sexy on the inside. Outward beauty is just the icing on the cake babe! Lovely! But in poem form please!
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a heart of gold something cold mysterious yet dark something i hold till i live no more she is a mother she is my love she is everthing i want and need but everything i fear she is always the one to bring my eye's to tear with everthing that hearts her so oh how i wish we two could grow old she is clean and polite something every man wants but cant cause she is mine every night crazy in love with what she is she stole my heart that i did not mean to give this to me is what a women is not a thing but a person always changeing always diffrent but always the same when i need her by my side even when im wrong i know she will always be there by my side. Beautiful!
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Hmmm, the right genitalia indicative of being female and the age of maturation considered to be "adult" = Woman <<----laughing, oh hush now girlfriend, we want the men to work for this one!
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 well ill try and help but that is not a varry good poem just a quickie i wish i would have took time to think up a good one thow haha
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well ill try and help but that is not a varry good poem just a quickie i wish i would have took time to think up a good one thow haha You have all day cupcake
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<<-----waiting for H to mesmerize her
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Well I hope this meets your standers MsWizard...
Tell me what you think to.. Innocence,curiosity behold those eyes, She hides away her tears,smiles and dismisses her sighs. She is so discreet with those dimples and rosy cheeks, her laugh makes you wish you are the one she seeks. Her hands of delicacy,crowned with good nature,warmth and comfort. protecting her loved ones from all the negatives and hurt. Her lips of love sing music of beauiful notes, out of her mouth is advice,good words and quotes. Her soul that brings peace and joy as she approaches, her chest you cry on,an outfit for all her brooches. Her feet walk only the path of justice,rightousness and peace. She converts others to good,their evil actions cease. She trods onto thorns of misery and strife, she unlatches the doors,unlatches a book to her life. I forgot the important part,the most important part of all. it's the heart which carries emotions,feelings big and small. It holds your pain and mine deep down in the pit. tending to your wounds when you trip and you hit. When you hit the temple of God,so hard,you cannot rise. You see her understanding smile and your affliction has diminished its size. She's ready to meet the day,ready to walk with poise. she's ready to be an angel,ready to project her voice. |
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A giving beauty not reflected in a mirror,
Warmth and compassion extended without fear, Deep caring lending itself to a mans life, Reserving more for a child in times of strife, A mind and soul that hum's with vibrant thought, In a word unique,pure,wise and since the beginning of time all men have sought.. |
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Well I hope this meets your standers MsWizard... Tell me what you think to.. Innocence,curiosity behold those eyes, She hides away her tears,smiles and dismisses her sighs. She is so discreet with those dimples and rosy cheeks, her laugh makes you wish you are the one she seeks. Her hands of delicacy,crowned with good nature,warmth and comfort. protecting her loved ones from all the negatives and hurt. Her lips of love sing music of beauiful notes, out of her mouth is advice,good words and quotes. Her soul that brings peace and joy as she approaches, her chest you cry on,an outfit for all her brooches. Her feet walk only the path of justice,rightousness and peace. She converts others to good,their evil actions cease. She trods onto thorns of misery and strife, she unlatches the doors,unlatches a book to her life. I forgot the important part,the most important part of all. it's the heart which carries emotions,feelings big and small. It holds your pain and mine deep down in the pit. tending to your wounds when you trip and you hit. When you hit the temple of God,so hard,you cannot rise. You see her understanding smile and your affliction has diminished its size. She's ready to meet the day,ready to walk with poise. she's ready to be an angel,ready to project her voice. Gorgeous! Thank you!
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A giving beauty not reflected in a mirror, Warmth and compassion extended without fear, Deep caring lending itself to a mans life, Reserving more for a child in times of strife, A mind and soul that hum's with vibrant thought, In a word unique,pure,wise and since the beginning of time all men have sought.. Absolutely beautiful, thank you~
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