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Topic: Safe journey
AtariBaby Joined Thu 07/17/08 Posts: 1497	Tue 07/29/08 02:34 PM
The concrete burns me, what a scorching day. People living the dream, children laughing at play. I squint hard due to the sun, take a drink, it has begun. Searching, looking, focusing My life is an acquired one. Time for me is deceptive, the sunlight is nearly done. The night air chills me, my thoughts begin to run. Does my life have meaning? It very rarely seems fun. Male. White. Single. Early twenties. I squeeze the trigger on my gun.

redhead44613 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 12976	Tue 07/29/08 02:37 PM
wow....that was amazing!!

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 07/29/08 02:38 PM


AtariBaby Joined Thu 07/17/08 Posts: 1497	Wed 07/30/08 04:29 AM
Thank you very much

lifestooshort6 Joined Mon 12/31/07 Posts: 6667	Wed 07/30/08 04:31 AM


AtariBaby Joined Thu 07/17/08 Posts: 1497	Wed 07/30/08 04:34 AM
Your new pic looks really good!!!

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Wed 07/30/08 05:31 AM
enjoy life its blessing and privilege both The concrete burns me, what a scorching day. People living the dream, children laughing at play. I squint hard due to the sun, take a drink, it has begun. Searching, looking, focusing My life is an acquired one. Time for me is deceptive, the sunlight is nearly done. The night air chills me, my thoughts begin to run. Does my life have meaning? It very rarely seems fun. Male. White. Single. Early twenties. I squeeze the trigger on my gun.

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Wed 07/30/08 06:34 AM


AtariBaby Joined Thu 07/17/08 Posts: 1497	Wed 07/30/08 08:37 AM
Just in case of any confusion. This write is about a stealth kill by an assassin!!

lifestooshort6 Joined Mon 12/31/07 Posts: 6667	Wed 07/30/08 08:41 AM
Your new pic looks really good!!! ty

AtariBaby Joined Thu 07/17/08 Posts: 1497	Wed 07/30/08 08:46 AM
Your new pic looks really good!!! ty

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