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Topic: Death... sends Life
LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 07/27/08 11:46 PM
Mother's Day gone too soon…. A day to be filled with Joy My son of two playing in the Yard Peach Pie Cooling in the Window Sill A scoop or two of Vanilla Ice Cream too,,,,,,, 6 months Pregnant she will be a girl I'll dress her in Pink So I think,,,,,,, Thats a story in its self... lol The night before Mom called to say (( Light one ))) yep that was my name Given to me from her heart,, Denise Ann When the world felt her wrath... lol Such Memories she and I would share Hours of chatter,, Hours of tears This Women you see lifted my fears Mommy I said,, How I miss you soo Blake and I need to come home Overwhelming my Heart feels torn.... No worries she tells me Life is full Ryan and I are getting through Her heart ways heavy, her Soul broken This women you see lost her husband Some years have passed her heart tries to mend Alone at times she fills me in... Denise my darling I love you so Mommy I say ,,, Ya Ditto..Me too Fast-forward 6 hours,, my Phone rang today This Mother's Day would be our Last..... Doctors told us ,, there's nothing we can do its just a matter of time....... May turns to June,, July shall follow Mom's only wish was for me to smile Mom's last words I love you my Daughter 21st of July the Angels did come Took my Rock My Light and My Sun Returning in August born on the 4th My Daughter was born under the Moon Eyes of an Angel Hair filled with a Glow You see this Child was born long ago Namesake of my Mother,, Lives Within another.... Blessed in life,, Blessed in Death Upon my Heart she shall always rest... 23 years ago today I buried my Mother,, There is not a day that goes by that we don’t speak She lives within me yet her touch seems so far away,, I miss her deeply and as the eve of my Daughter’s birth approaches once again,, the sadness takes over,, Life is too short,, always tell those you love,, just how much you love them..

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sun 07/27/08 11:51 PM
Beautiful Poignant

PoeticMaster Joined Fri 07/18/08 Posts: 411	Mon 07/28/08 12:18 AM
standing on the precipice of goodbye the infinite blackhole of no tomorrow where one cycle ends and another begins the houglass of no more bears my sighs witthin the barren chasm of death's sorrow as the angels reaady to play their violins in honor of the life of grace you did walk leaving footprints in earth's muddied chalk I wait in the clumsy minutes for my I love you and a different mother/son relationship starts anew In the last year I have lost both parents and though we all know oneday we will be parentless when that day comes and thereafter it feels so surreal. I got the call my mother died in the middle of writing this somehow I just knew. s1ow stole my comment beautiful and poignant indeed!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 07/28/08 12:34 AM
standing on the precipice of goodbye the infinite blackhole of no tomorrow where one cycle ends and another begins the houglass of no more bears my sighs witthin the barren chasm of death's sorrow as the angels reaady to play their violins in honor of the life of grace you did walk leaving footprints in earth's muddied chalk I wait in the clumsy minutes for my I love you and a different mother/son relationship starts anew In the last year I have lost both parents and though we all know oneday we will be parentless when that day comes and thereafter it feels so surreal. I got the call my mother died in the middle of writing this somehow I just knew. s1ow stole my comment beautiful and poignant indeed! (((( Harold )))) You fill me (((( Poetic )))) The loss of my Mother still to this day,,, leaves an emptiness within my shell,,, I still ask Why???? over and over again,, I lost my father when I was 15,, My mother was my strength,,, and when she passed well a bit of me some how escaped,,, Thank you for your kindness and Hugs for your loss

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 07/28/08 01:31 AM
Oh Dee, it is good you keep that memory alive. Thank you for sharing for those wonderful words. Two of the greatest men I grew up with, died a week before my birthday and it will be hard for me to deal with it, because they were two men who were more like a father to me, than my real father.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 07/28/08 01:43 AM
((((( Robert )))) Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm big ole hugs and kiss's

Unknow Joined Wed 10/24/07 Posts: 7373	Mon 07/28/08 03:43 AM
Gave me chills Good one LA

sparkleplenty424 Joined Mon 07/21/08 Posts: 463	Mon 07/28/08 04:10 AM
(((((((((Denise)))))))))))))

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76414	Mon 07/28/08 07:33 AM
(((((((Buttercup)))))) I feel your pain and the heaviness in your heart. But one thing no one can take away from you is the memories that were created and will always remain within your heart. Pass those memories on to your children and grand children her memory will live on.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 07/28/08 08:09 AM
(((Denise))) very beautiful

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 07/28/08 11:20 AM
Hmmm perhaps the missing is the bucket we drop in the well of the sensory memories.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 07/29/08 10:34 AM
Hmmm perhaps the missing is the bucket we drop in the well of the sensory memories. Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes,, I shall ponder those wishes Kiss's ((( Pudding Cup ))) Love you my Angel ((( Pam ))) You fill me with delight ((( John )))) ((( Sparkle )))

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Tue 07/29/08 10:44 AM
At times like these I never really know what to say. The words just don't ever come to me. Your words just leave me here...

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 07/29/08 10:46 AM
At times like these I never really know what to say. The words just don't ever come to me. Your words just leave me here... Hello Beautiful,,, Love you today, tomorrow and yesturday... Sara is coming up this weekend we are celebrating her Day of Birth,,,, Sooooooooooooooooooooo Wish you were here Love you