Topic: bits and pieces
PoeticMaster's photo
Sat 07/26/08 01:01 PM
Edited by PoeticMaster on Sat 07/26/08 01:06 PM
the velvet sky churns in anticipation
sated in thought, twisted in twilight --

beautiful the colors,
intricate the design,
captivating, mesmerizing
the twists and turns
of the spinning
you eloquently perform.

awestruck by the beauty
of your frail mind
where Pleiades shines
within its tattered slivers --

holding life in one hand
the other draped
in the sea of night.
whispers of angels
tickle your ears,
the congregation
of the elven trust you
to be their maiden,
the heavens open
with just one tear
of yours.

so easily and naturally we slip into us,
the slipknot made of moments lived –

i ante up my breath
in front of your vault
of oxygen
mouth to heart,
bits and pieces,
the gift of risk.

LAMom's photo
Sun 07/27/08 12:51 AM

the velvet sky churns in anticipation
sated in thought, twisted in twilight --

beautiful the colors,
intricate the design,
captivating, mesmerizing
the twists and turns
of the spinning
you eloquently perform.

awestruck by the beauty
of your frail mind
where Pleiades shines
within its tattered slivers --

holding life in one hand
the other draped
in the sea of night.
whispers of angels
tickle your ears,
the congregation
of the elven trust you
to be their maiden,
the heavens open
with just one tear
of yours.

so easily and naturally we slip into us,
the slipknot made of moments lived –

i ante up my breath
in front of your vault
of oxygen
mouth to heart,
bits and pieces,
the gift of risk.



Such a precious gift it is..

flowerforyou

PoeticMaster's photo
Sun 07/27/08 12:52 AM
you are too sweetbigsmile flowerforyou

flame1cutie's photo
Sun 07/27/08 06:08 AM
:smile: flowerforyou flowerforyou

PoeticMaster's photo
Sun 07/27/08 09:38 AM

:smile: flowerforyou flowerforyou


thank ya thank ya happy

no photo
Sun 07/27/08 09:43 AM
Well done!

PoeticMaster's photo
Sun 07/27/08 11:51 AM

Well done!


drinks

catchme_ifucan's photo
Sun 07/27/08 03:49 PM
Nice