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AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/26/08 05:05 AM
Again you simply are such an amazing soul,,, breathtaking (((pkd))), (((MsTeddy))), (((Cy))), (((Denise)))....You are such tender hearts; ty all for your love and support....I am always touched by you

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 07/26/08 05:40 AM
I can't stop looking into your eyes. They hypnotize, mesmerize, baptize, etherealize, and, yes, realize, Love. It's true; these are the windows to your sacred Soul. And, I alone have been given access to this wondrous place, this divine space, this most gentle grace. I enter with tender care. I enter with beloved prayer. I enter to declare my Love for you, my hope for you, my desire for you. And, I will never tire of the story in your eyes. Like the sweetness of a lullaby, I rest within your eyes, I rest not needing to try. I rest, oh I rest... JDS 07/25/08 In your eyes I see your soul. In your eyes I lose all my sorrow and see only our tomorrow. Its through these windows in you, that I see you so true. The green of the center is but a glance as to their core. Staring, mesmerizing, wanting to see more and more. To be lost into your deep intrancing reflections of your heart. Knowing, yearning, growing into one true heart to never part. Your eyes are the windows to your incredible essence of light. That ingage me into this life long romantic flight! Your beautiful poem is yet another in a vast field of moving sensations that allow us to feel a part of YOU. Great read Angel..

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/26/08 11:52 AM
I can't stop looking into your eyes. They hypnotize, mesmerize, baptize, etherealize, and, yes, realize, Love. It's true; these are the windows to your sacred Soul. And, I alone have been given access to this wondrous place, this divine space, this most gentle grace. I enter with tender care. I enter with beloved prayer. I enter to declare my Love for you, my hope for you, my desire for you. And, I will never tire of the story in your eyes. Like the sweetness of a lullaby, I rest within your eyes, I rest not needing to try. I rest, oh I rest... JDS 07/25/08 In your eyes I see your soul. In your eyes I lose all my sorrow and see only our tomorrow. Its through these windows in you, that I see you so true. The green of the center is but a glance as to their core. Staring, mesmerizing, wanting to see more and more. To be lost into your deep intrancing reflections of your heart. Knowing, yearning, growing into one true heart to never part. Your eyes are the windows to your incredible essence of light. That ingage me into this life long romantic flight! Your beautiful poem is yet another in a vast field of moving sensations that allow us to feel a part of YOU. Great read Angel.. Terry, that is so incredibly beautiful and touching. I don't know what to say except ty, with all my heart. (Joyful tears for the beauty of YOU! Your beauty is truly transparent)

PoeticMaster Joined Fri 07/18/08 Posts: 411	Sat 07/26/08 12:03 PM
serene, beautiful, gentle, everything love is/should be and could be

MadameGeek Joined Wed 01/23/08 Posts: 64	Sat 07/26/08 05:43 PM
" I rest within your eyes, I rest not needing to try. I rest, oh I rest... " When seeing is loving, we are blessed because we CAN rest. Just lovely, my girl

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 07/26/08 05:46 PM
Lovely AngelFace~reminds me of Peter Gabriel~ "in your eyes the light the heat in your eyes I am complete in your eyes I see the doorway to a thousand churches in your eyes the resolution of all the fruitless searches in your eyes I see the light and the heat in your eyes oh, I want to be that complete I want to touch the light the heat I see in your eyes"

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Sat 07/26/08 05:53 PM
Love what a great emotion. That was great AngelLight Thank you i find myself waiting for your next one

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 07/26/08 09:09 PM
This poem leaves my mind & heart so speechless... Excellent write...

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 07/26/08 10:57 PM
I thought I had commented on this one sweetie...I am so sorry for paying attention to such a beautiful piece of write. It was mesmerizing to hear these words as they flowed freely and expressively.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 07/27/08 07:45 AM
serene, beautiful, gentle, everything love is/should be and could be Ty poeticMaster.... it's very nice to meet you...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 07/27/08 07:48 AM
" I rest within your eyes, I rest not needing to try. I rest, oh I rest... " When seeing is loving, we are blessed because we CAN rest. Just lovely, my girl Thank you (((MadameGeek)))....looking forward to your next write

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 07/27/08 07:49 AM
Lovely AngelFace~reminds me of Peter Gabriel~ "in your eyes the light the heat in your eyes I am complete in your eyes I see the doorway to a thousand churches in your eyes the resolution of all the fruitless searches in your eyes I see the light and the heat in your eyes oh, I want to be that complete I want to touch the light the heat I see in your eyes" That's beautiful MsWiz...thanks for sharing that

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 07/27/08 07:51 AM
Love what a great emotion. That was great AngelLight Thank you i find myself waiting for your next one With gratitude 1000, ty.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 07/27/08 07:53 AM
This poem leaves my mind & heart so speechless... Excellent write... What a beautiful remark Up....Thank you so very much!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 07/27/08 07:57 AM
I thought I had commented on this one sweetie...I am so sorry for paying attention to such a beautiful piece of write. It was mesmerizing to hear these words as they flowed freely and expressively. Robert, what an awesome compliment to have you here again. How I so appreciate your presence, and your gentle kindness

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 07/27/08 10:33 AM
I can't stop looking into your eyes. They hypnotize, mesmerize, baptize, etherealize, and, yes, realize, Love. It's true; these are the windows to your sacred Soul. And, I alone have been given access to this wondrous place, this divine space, this most gentle grace. I enter with tender care. I enter with beloved prayer. I enter to declare my Love for you, my hope for you, my desire for you. And, I will never tire of the story in your eyes. Like the sweetness of a lullaby, I rest within your eyes, I rest not needing to try. I rest, oh I rest... JDS 07/25/08 In your eyes I see your soul. In your eyes I lose all my sorrow and see only our tomorrow. Its through these windows in you, that I see you so true. The green of the center is but a glance as to their core. Staring, mesmerizing, wanting to see more and more. To be lost into your deep intrancing reflections of your heart. Knowing, yearning, growing into one true heart to never part. Your eyes are the windows to your incredible essence of light. That ingage me into this life long romantic flight! Your beautiful poem is yet another in a vast field of moving sensations that allow us to feel a part of YOU. Great read Angel.. Terry, that is so incredibly beautiful and touching. I don't know what to say except ty, with all my heart. (Joyful tears for the beauty of YOU! Your beauty is truly transparent) Ahhh, YOU ,,,, make every man feel ALIVE and MOVED! Thank You!

writteninstone Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 95	Sun 07/27/08 04:51 PM
nicely written

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 07/28/08 08:45 AM
You're welcome Terry, and ty written...