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ah well, at least i tried =[
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Well from what my mind ponders,,
I get a sense of life in a Re-verse Cycle,,, Hungering for my Shell's Home |
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thats so extremely close its not even funny.
congrats The cake is the hugest metaphor As is the use of the homonym Night/knight |
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Anyone else have any opinions?
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When I go back to the Cake,, I feel control taking over and then again my mind goes back to the Cycle of Re-Verse,,
A sense of tasteless Hunger fills my mind,, and I am off in the pondering stage.. Incredible write,, filled with so much passion 
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Edited by
Unknow
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Tue 07/22/08 05:06 PM
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The knight is jesus and your talking about the book of consummation better known as the revelation of jesus christ.
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When I go back to the Cake,, I feel control taking over and then again my mind goes back to the Cycle of Re-Verse,, A sense of tasteless Hunger fills my mind,, and I am off in the pondering stage.. Incredible write,, filled with so much passion
THERE YOU GO THATS IT a tasteless hunger! BEAUTIFUL =] |
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And sadly I have not been a Christian in a long time, but i do like the idea, it was creative =]
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When I go back to the Cake,, I feel control taking over and then again my mind goes back to the Cycle of Re-Verse,, A sense of tasteless Hunger fills my mind,, and I am off in the pondering stage.. Incredible write,, filled with so much passion
THERE YOU GO THATS IT a tasteless hunger! BEAUTIFUL =] Wisdom beyond your years my Dear,, Enjoyed and will bask in the making of an incredible friendship... Thank you
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Wisdom beyond my years? I dont wish to brag or anything of the sort, so I truly do not know how to reply, maybe I do, maybe I dont, all I know are the words I speak
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Wisdom beyond my years? I dont wish to brag or anything of the sort, so I truly do not know how to reply, maybe I do, maybe I dont, all I know are the words I speak Brag Darlin its a good thing,, use it wisely and you shall seek your desire,,, I await for more of your soul ponderings amoung these pages |
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My soul has been empty for a while, thats the point of these poems
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