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Topic: Tears
Dopey180 Joined Thu 04/03/08 Posts: 583	Mon 07/21/08 01:12 AM
My eyes start to water whenever you go out the door my heart starts to ache whenever i want you more my body turns numb whenever we're far apart my soul starts to fade whenever we depart my head starts to spin whenever i think of you my brain shuts down whenever you touch me through and through but the truth really is that you'll always be here and you'll throw away my biggest fear

Madtanker03 Joined Thu 02/28/08 Posts: 262	Mon 07/21/08 01:15 AM
My eyes start to water whenever you go out the door my heart starts to ache whenever i want you more my body turns numb whenever we're far apart my soul starts to fade whenever we depart my head starts to spin whenever i think of you my brain shuts down whenever you touch me through and through but the truth really is that you'll always be here and you'll throw away my biggest fear Sounds idealistic, but it would be nice...

guyguy1225 Joined Sat 09/15/07 Posts: 1936	Mon 07/21/08 01:15 AM
again very good !

Dopey180 Joined Thu 04/03/08 Posts: 583	Mon 07/21/08 01:26 AM
Thank you so much guys glad you like it

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/21/08 04:22 AM

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