Topic: Shadow
anonymous326's photo
Sun 07/20/08 02:07 PM
Enthralled in the depts of shadows
long faded out by the sun
your warmth fails to reach me
as my freedom has yet to come.

I sleep within these shadows
for you leave me no choice
because you have yet to listen
and have not heard my voice.

And I still try to reach you
standing in mid air
but how could I, I'm just a shadow
why in the world would you care.

Now i fear it's too late
As the final hour draws near
and I can no longer approach you
I cannot even shed a tear.


myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 07/20/08 02:11 PM
Very nice flowers

d4tc's photo
Sun 07/20/08 02:12 PM
Nice Write! drinker

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Sun 07/20/08 02:12 PM
Nice Depth and feeling man..

rainysky39's photo
Sun 07/20/08 02:13 PM
Nice

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Sun 07/20/08 02:25 PM
Nicely done!

anonymous326's photo
Sun 07/20/08 02:31 PM
thanks guys really appreatiate it