Topic: Farewell
hcsrevenge's photo
Fri 07/18/08 08:56 PM
Finally I have found a way
Understanding what went on
Clearly there were times I could have
Kept my counsel to myself
Yet I chose to speak
Only to hurt myself
Ultimately the blame is mine
Just one word too many
Spoken in truth
Held against me
Failing to stifle me
Rain on my parade
Only provided
Motivation for the muse
Having tried my best
I humbly bow
Keeping thoughts inside
Even though I want to speak
Readily, I leave

no photo
Fri 07/18/08 08:57 PM
:cry: flowerforyou

hdjackyl's photo
Fri 07/18/08 09:07 PM
What was that about?

hcsrevenge's photo
Fri 07/18/08 09:10 PM

What was that about?
Just a poem..feeling melancholy.

Sometimes you want to go back and do things over, but you can't so you just say goodbye.

no photo
Fri 07/18/08 09:11 PM
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 07/18/08 09:29 PM
Edited by LAMom on Fri 07/18/08 09:29 PM

Finally I have found a way
Understanding what went on
Clearly there were times I could have
Kept my counsel to myself
Yet I chose to speak
Only to hurt myself
Ultimately the blame is mine
Just one word too many
Spoken in truth
Held against me
Failing to stifle me
Rain on my parade
Only provided
Motivation for the muse
Having tried my best
I humbly bow
Keeping thoughts inside
Even though I want to speak
Readily, I leave



(((( Hugs ))))

I too know this feeling,, flowers

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 07/19/08 09:03 AM
Good write! I have felt this way many times.
Welcome to the poetry section.
flowers

hcsrevenge's photo
Sun 07/20/08 04:30 PM

Good write! I have felt this way many times.
Welcome to the poetry section.
flowers
Thank you. The people here are the kindest I have ever encountered.

hcsrevenge's photo
Sun 07/20/08 04:30 PM

Good write! I have felt this way many times.
Welcome to the poetry section.
flowers
Thank you. The people here are the kindest I have ever encountered.

s1owhand's photo
Sun 07/20/08 04:56 PM
bigsmile

"Nothing is often a good thing to say, and always a clever thing to say."

-Will Durant

hcsrevenge's photo
Mon 07/21/08 05:17 PM

bigsmile

"Nothing is often a good thing to say, and always a clever thing to say."

-Will Durant
True, but sadly, not my style, sweety.

no photo
Mon 07/21/08 05:33 PM
frown I'm glad all the great people in history didn't give up.:heart: