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Topic: Crippling Insanity
Blurple's photo
Tue 07/15/08 10:27 AM
Crippling insanity
this fear
held within
shown without

Crippling insanity
my brain
never knowing
always understanding

Crippling insanity
another day
passing time
slipping away

Crippling insanity
our society
normal people
crazed world

Crippling insanity
last breath
giving up
living again

jimz's photo
Tue 07/15/08 10:48 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Blurple's photo
Tue 07/15/08 10:51 AM
Flowers from you are like roses from heaven

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Tue 07/15/08 10:59 AM
frustrated<<-- feels like that-- >> :banana:


Blurple's photo
Tue 07/15/08 11:04 AM
You are so right John... thank you for taking the time!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 07/15/08 11:06 AM
Nodding. Head tilted to see hmm yup the tunnel does expand lil bit further.

Blurple's photo
Tue 07/15/08 11:25 AM
Quit lookin between my ears I haven't cleaned in there lately!!:laughing: :laughing:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 07/15/08 11:26 AM
flowers

Blurple's photo
Tue 07/15/08 11:27 AM
Thanks MsTflowers

pkh's photo
Tue 07/15/08 11:37 AM
I can relate good write.Your on a roll

Blurple's photo
Tue 07/15/08 11:48 AM
Thank you Pam!flowers

LAMom's photo
Tue 07/15/08 11:54 AM

Crippling insanity
this fear
held within
shown without

Crippling insanity
my brain
never knowing
always understanding

Crippling insanity
another day
passing time
slipping away

Crippling insanity
our society
normal people
crazed world

Crippling insanity
last breath
giving up
living again


I have read and re-read all your posts,, I have come to enjoy Your vision, Your soul, Your being...When I walk away i take a bit of you with me ... Thank you for allowing me to see life and the living of it ,,in a different light,,,

Your spirit is enlighting flowers

Blurple's photo
Tue 07/15/08 11:58 AM
Thanks to you LA!!

brwnkimba's photo
Tue 07/15/08 12:14 PM
So the world turns
As my thoughts gather
Dreams make me dizzy

Wipe the tears from the clown
A new face is shown
No longer funny is he

Friends are family too
You're all my sisters & brothers
A reunion of poetic warriors

Framed for guilty pleasures
Do my time in her jurisdiction
Work hard for love is my employer


robert1652's photo
Tue 07/15/08 03:31 PM

Crippling insanity
this fear
held within
shown without

Crippling insanity
my brain
never knowing
always understanding

Crippling insanity
another day
passing time
slipping away

Crippling insanity
our society
normal people
crazed world

Crippling insanity
last breath
giving up
living again


This is a nice write

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowers

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 07/16/08 12:18 AM
Very good descriptives as well as insights.

no photo
Wed 07/16/08 12:30 AM
Very nice! flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 07/16/08 08:47 AM
strong poem and strong ending. I like.:smile: :smile:

Blurple's photo
Fri 07/18/08 09:41 AM

So the world turns
As my thoughts gather
Dreams make me dizzy

Wipe the tears from the clown
A new face is shown
No longer funny is he

Friends are family too
You're all my sisters & brothers
A reunion of poetic warriors

Framed for guilty pleasures
Do my time in her jurisdiction
Work hard for love is my employer





This from a man so wise!!! Tis ambrosia to my ears and my heart!

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Fri 07/18/08 10:01 AM
:wink: flowerforyou drinker

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