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Topic: Rites of Passage
EvyT Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 71	Mon 07/14/08 08:06 PM
Wombman once walked with concrete shoes Built strength, Learned to handle resistance So she could go back and carry her sister Who is not heavy because she has been prepared for this She is strong enough for the both of them Teaches her sister the technique for walking with concrete shoes And how to slowly chip away the weight

DrX Joined Sun 01/13/08 Posts: 1539	Mon 07/14/08 08:07 PM
that's heavy!

Moondark Joined Tue 11/27/07 Posts: 5866	Mon 07/14/08 08:07 PM
Hey, someone's back. you were gone for a while.....

DrX Joined Sun 01/13/08 Posts: 1539	Mon 07/14/08 08:09 PM
Hey, someone's back. you were gone for a while..... I'm like the tide, I come and go, but thanks for noticing.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 07/14/08 08:13 PM
WB DrX

DrX Joined Sun 01/13/08 Posts: 1539	Mon 07/14/08 08:38 PM
WB DrX Thanks

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Mon 07/14/08 10:09 PM
interesting nice piece

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