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Topic: senseless
s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/14/08 06:50 PM
saw her but without my eyes felt her though there was no touch heard her laughter when she was gone taste her sweet acerbic wit scent a nuzzle on the neck hopelessly insensible in her presence

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 07/14/08 06:51 PM
saw her but without my eyes felt her though there was no touch heard her laughter when she was gone taste her sweet acerbic wit scent a nuzzle on the neck hopelessly insensible in her presence Exquisite. ((((((((HENRY))))))))))

crazysillygirl Joined Mon 01/29/07 Posts: 4869	Mon 07/14/08 06:54 PM
what is acerbic?????

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/14/08 06:56 PM
sharp or biting (((A)))

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 07/14/08 06:59 PM
sharp or biting (((A))) When did you write this piece H? It's truly lovely....

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/14/08 07:01 PM
6:49 PM PST today and thank you....

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 07/14/08 07:04 PM
Nice! (((Slow)))

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 07/14/08 07:04 PM
6:49 PM PST today and thank you.... <<----has cut and copied it to her personal favorites....

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/14/08 07:05 PM Edited by s1owhand on Mon 07/14/08 07:08 PM
(((Ms1stFlower)))

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Mon 07/14/08 08:49 PM Edited by Puffins1958 on Mon 07/14/08 08:49 PM
{{{{{{Harold}}}}}} Wonderful!!!!!

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Mon 07/14/08 10:06 PM
awsome piece

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 07/15/08 05:12 AM
Great job with words and form!....

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 07/15/08 11:50 AM
awesome, loved it

Blurple Joined Mon 06/30/08 Posts: 76	Tue 07/15/08 11:53 AM
Nice write (((H)))

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