Topic: the open soul
jimz's photo
Sun 07/13/08 04:11 PM
Edited by jimz on Sun 07/13/08 04:47 PM
there is
no distance
in the mirror
even the mirrors
of others
and all these
reflections
i dont mean
to sound well so mean
lets break all
our fuucking
mirrors
and see
our
selves
as we
are

there
i am
in this
maze
and
sometimes
there
might as
well be
someone
dangling
treats
to make
me go
their
way
an
absolute(less)
path
man my blisters
popping inside
my eyes

my only
freedom
is in god
gods afterflower
gods sea
god in you sweet thing
god in me

simple when
sirens
blow
before
my time

simple
when god
knocks me
down
instead
of me

i knock
my aass
out

the moon
sometimes
too soon
in my
dreams

i sweat
in verses
without
moving
yet
i smile
in my
tears
yet
i fade
yet
i
live

come
here
in the
mystic
night
lets all
be born
again
every
moment

yet
i live
yes we
live

EarthSprite's photo
Sun 07/13/08 04:19 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sun 07/13/08 04:22 PM
thank you, EarthSprite, peace

EarthSprite's photo
Sun 07/13/08 04:23 PM
Peace and light to you ...

LAMom's photo
Sun 07/13/08 06:52 PM
I breathe I live
In your heart I hear
Clasp your hand in mine
Lets walk abit
Wonderful ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes the Image
the Mirror,,, Quite Devine flowers

d4tc's photo
Mon 07/14/08 12:14 AM
"there is
no distance
in the mirror
even the mirrors
of others
and all these
reflections
i dont mean
to sound well so mean
lets break all
our fuucking
mirrors
and see
our
selves
as we
are"

drinker

A poem I was debating whether or not to post. It seems more fitting here.



Mirror Miror (Not the JSH Member)


Mirror Mirror
On the wall
Who will be
The first to
Fall

You You
Me Me
Hypnotized
Vanity

Us? We?
You? Me?
Tee Pee
for my
Sanity




Ploop

no photo
Mon 07/14/08 07:06 AM
Quite amazing write Jimmy.:smile:


Jason-creative mind as alwaysflowers

jimz's photo
Mon 07/14/08 01:52 PM
thank you everyone for your replies :heart:

peace
jimmy

pkh's photo
Mon 07/14/08 01:54 PM
very nice Jim

jimz's photo
Mon 07/14/08 01:57 PM

very nice Jim


sweetie, nice to hear from you, Pamflowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 07/14/08 05:53 PM
((((Jimmy)))) :heart: flowers

AngelLight's photo
Tue 07/15/08 05:33 AM
Great write ((Jimmy)) flowerforyou :heart:

Blurple's photo
Tue 07/15/08 10:53 AM
Looking without to look within is an amazing thing