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Topic: Winds of Change
MadameGeek Joined Wed 01/23/08 Posts: 64	Sun 07/13/08 09:15 AM
Winds of Change Let the winds of change blow over my memory, dulling the edges that grazed unto drawing blood, dousing the fires that burned low after scarring, leaving only the new growth of cool clean skin that never knew your touch. LCA 7/13/2008

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Winds of Change Let the winds of change blow over my memory, dulling the edges that grazed unto drawing blood, dousing the fires that burned low after scarring, leaving only the new growth of cool clean skin that never knew your touch. LCA 7/13/2008 THIS is very powerful, and touching, thank you.

MadameGeek Joined Wed 01/23/08 Posts: 64	Sun 07/13/08 12:20 PM
Thank you both for your kindness.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sun 07/13/08 12:23 PM
Good write! May the wind blow...

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sun 07/13/08 12:24 PM


MadameGeek Joined Wed 01/23/08 Posts: 64	Sun 07/13/08 12:50 PM
Thank you.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 07/13/08 12:58 PM
Winds of Change Let the winds of change blow over my memory, dulling the edges that grazed unto drawing blood, dousing the fires that burned low after scarring, leaving only the new growth of cool clean skin that never knew your touch. LCA 7/13/2008 Beautiful

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sun 07/13/08 01:01 PM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 07/14/08 10:06 AM
Very nice piece I think I sense a warm front approaching...

texasgentlman Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 111	Mon 07/14/08 10:10 AM
Blameless Love, anger hate and shame Makes me want to yell out Some one's to blame When my hand reaches out To point at thee To realize there,s three others Pointing back at me So I go to a mirror What do I see But the guilty party Looking back at me So in prayer my guilt I give to god up above He completely replaced it With his sweet purest love JodieNewby Copyright ©2008 Jodie M Newby

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 07/14/08 11:14 AM
wonderful

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 07/14/08 11:14 AM
Nice writes.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 07/14/08 01:02 PM
very nice poem

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Mon 07/14/08 01:52 PM
nice, loved it

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 07/15/08 07:27 PM
That is so sad, so intense, so powerful, so beautiful. Love you baby...

MadameGeek Joined Wed 01/23/08 Posts: 64	Thu 07/17/08 10:23 AM
(Passing Puffs Plus to Angel) Thanks, everyone, for your kind attention.

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