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Topic: Beautiful You
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 07/11/08 12:57 PM
I heard the news you were back on the coast. If I think back, you were the most beautiful thing that ever happened to me. You made me see; You helped me to believe; You let me be; You came in peace; You released the wonder in me. You Loved with no conditions, with no restrictions, with no contradictions, with no hesitations, with true conviction. I heard the news you were back on the coast. When I think back, I know you were the most beautiful thing that ever happened to me. JDS 07/11/08

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Fri 07/11/08 01:06 PM
When i think back.... Hi Angel, nice to see your still working your magic. Pleasure reading your passion.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 07/11/08 01:08 PM
When i think back.... Hi Angel, nice to see your still working your magic. Pleasure reading your passion. Thanks!! Hey bb, where have (((you))) been? So good to see you.

BobbyJ Joined Fri 02/22/08 Posts: 1368	Fri 07/11/08 01:19 PM
Angel, you continue to amaze me with the sensitivity and feeling of your writings.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Fri 07/11/08 01:21 PM
Now I loved that. That sounded so melodic. It had a tune to it all itself. Great write my dear.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 07/11/08 01:27 PM
Angel, you continue to amaze me with the sensitivity and feeling of your writings. Wow. Ty for that Bobby...Ty for such a wonderful compliment Ty too ((Robert))...I'm so glad you loved it...that's awesome. I appreciate your telling me so...

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Fri 07/11/08 01:29 PM
Beautiful, wonderful write Angel

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 07/11/08 01:36 PM
Beautiful, wonderful write Angel Thanks my...I'm really enjoying your writes too....you're very good

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Fri 07/11/08 11:17 PM
A N other G r E at L ight L I ftin G H ear T s Write.

CantonGal Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 124	Fri 07/11/08 11:27 PM
You write so beautiful.

isaac_dede Joined Sat 11/24/07 Posts: 10632	Fri 07/11/08 11:52 PM
beautiful

LightVoice Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 7405	Fri 07/11/08 11:57 PM
beautiful.. moving.. the way you wrote it allowed the reader to FEEL the emotions & thoughts as if they were their own

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/12/08 04:05 AM
A N other G r E at L ight L I ftin G H ear T s Write. ((((Sweet J))))

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/12/08 04:08 AM
You write so beautiful. Canton and LightVoice, ty; it's very nice to meet you both I look forward to seeing your writes. I very much appreciate your comments...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/12/08 04:09 AM
beautiful Thanks isaac. Right back at ya

Unknow Joined Wed 10/24/07 Posts: 7373	Sat 07/12/08 04:56 AM
""You Loved with no conditions, with no restrictions, with no contradictions, with no hesitations, with true conviction."" Nice, really like this part.

OneOfAKind4U Joined Sun 09/23/07 Posts: 688	Sat 07/12/08 05:17 AM
bravoooooooooooooooooo great write

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/12/08 06:00 AM
""You Loved with no conditions, with no restrictions, with no contradictions, with no hesitations, with true conviction."" Nice, really like this part. Thank you John!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/12/08 06:02 AM
bravoooooooooooooooooo great write Wow. Showered with flowers One....Ty!

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Sat 07/12/08 07:10 AM
a very sincer way to tribute someone I heard the news you were back on the coast. If I think back, you were the most beautiful thing that ever happened to me. You made me see; You helped me to believe; You let me be; You came in peace; You released the wonder in me. You Loved with no conditions, with no restrictions, with no contradictions, with no hesitations, with true conviction. I heard the news you were back on the coast. When I think back, I know you were the most beautiful thing that ever happened to me. JDS 07/11/08