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bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Fri 07/11/08 08:31 AM Edited by bigblue29 on Fri 07/11/08 09:00 AM
Its a wonder why i post to this site. In the words they've become mondane no less it was for your delight. Then it was to gain acceptance, in a futile attempt at pentenance. But soon it was to vent my contempt and frustration. At no one in peticular was there a dedication. It was in my mind to write something provocative and thought provoking. But it seems i'm found wanting and sometimes interpreted as though i was joking. Writting poems of society, love and humanity. The sanity, perplexity and animosity all with undefined style and always falling short, rendering a commonality. Even now an understanding of the purposed poets of great. Striving through volumes in the dwindling hours of late. Exploration to no avail. Struggling in conformity the manotany is unshifted in its state. So too is my legacy. I leave you with a joke........it is simply, me, with no debate.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Fri 07/11/08 10:26 AM
Me thinks the joke may well be on the critical mind that inspired this entry.

mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Fri 07/11/08 10:50 AM
Me thinks the joke may well be on the critical mind that inspired this entry. Ditto, and my I add it seems to me the ones who are critical of others can't write a note let alone a poem!!! Just keep doin' what you do best my friend!!!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 07/11/08 10:54 AM
I've pondered and I have so wonder Oh my Friend,,, Words spoke words felt Write for you Write with Love Write with Joy, Sadness and Dispair Write ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh silly me You do,, And within the display of Life I've seen, felt and heard Whispers of your Soul,, Deeply reached Hugs

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Fri 07/11/08 04:23 PM Edited by bigblue29 on Fri 07/11/08 04:32 PM
Me thinks the joke may well be on the critical mind that inspired this entry. Ditto, and my I add it seems to me the ones who are critical of others can't write a note let alone a poem!!! Just keep doin' what you do best my friend!!! To Mark and your lady thank you for Your careing words.

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Fri 07/11/08 04:25 PM
Me thinks the joke may well be on the critical mind that inspired this entry. Ditto, and my I add it seems to me the ones who are critical of others can't write a note let alone a poem!!! Just keep doin' what you do best my friend!!! To Mark and your lady thank you for your care. Its nice to take a break and then comeback to friends like you!

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Fri 07/11/08 04:28 PM
I've pondered and I have so wonder Oh my Friend,,, Words spoke words felt Write for you Write with Love Write with Joy, Sadness and Dispair Write ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh silly me You do,, And within the display of Life I've seen, felt and heard Whispers of your Soul,, Deeply reached Hugs Understanding and hugs.... LAMOM thank you so much.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 07/11/08 07:00 PM
Follow the walk within,,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhh the Beauty you so bestow Quite amazing,,,

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Fri 07/11/08 10:18 PM
What words you write, do convey the meaning that you so want to express in these pages. Keep up the good work my friend and never give up. The more you bestow upon others, the more you will bestow into their hearts.

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Sat 07/12/08 12:20 AM
Thanks Robert. Appreciate the comments.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/12/08 04:31 AM
Oh, my friend, keep writing

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 07/12/08 09:10 AM
We ought to be happy with what we write and not worry about conformity. Write because it gives you satisfaction.

mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Sat 07/12/08 02:07 PM
Me thinks the joke may well be on the critical mind that inspired this entry. Ditto, and my I add it seems to me the ones who are critical of others can't write a note let alone a poem!!! Just keep doin' what you do best my friend!!! To Mark and your lady thank you for your care. Its nice to take a break and then comeback to friends like you! Your very welcome my friend!!!!

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Sat 07/12/08 02:08 PM
Thank you ladies, feels good to post again.

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Sun 07/13/08 09:22 AM
Just a thank you for the ones whom have read this.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 07/13/08 11:47 AM
Just a thank you for the ones whom have read this. No-one is EVER just a joke as it took GOD to long to mold your spirit so YOU my friend can be down and KICKED but NEVER a joke to this guy!

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Sun 07/13/08 07:44 PM
Terry, I'm gjad you still around! Thanks for commenting and don't let people get to ya. Your friend Eric

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Sun 07/13/08 08:56 PM
bravo bravo

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Mon 07/14/08 08:55 AM
bravo bravo Glad you liked it!

bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Mon 07/14/08 08:56 AM
bravo bravo Glad you liked it!