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Topic: I Become
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 07/04/08 04:29 PM
My Love, I burn for you, yearn for you, turn to you in my most difficult and sweetest moments. Through your Love I am sanctified, knowing myself wholly. In your Love I am wrapped in the warmth of the sun, needing nothing more than this cloak of protection, this cloak of affection. By your Love I arrive where I am destined to be more alive. In you I thrive. I have peace of mind. I find true Love… Passion, Compassion. Yes, a heavenly mansion. With you I bloom, I become.... JDS 07/04/08

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 07/04/08 05:15 PM
With you I bloom, I become.... For all Eternity Humble Beautiful,,, Simply Beautiful

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 07/04/08 06:52 PM
With you I bloom, I become.... For all Eternity Humble Beautiful,,, Simply Beautiful ((((Denise)))), Ty

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Fri 07/04/08 06:55 PM
I agree....such beautiful words. I love when I can feel what's been written

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 07/05/08 01:26 AM
With-in you I feel complete. As your warmth surrounds me like a sheet. I feel and see your inner space completely open and gazed upon your face. This time shared is so unfolding wrapped together longing and holding. With-you life is felt so true. And with-in you, I feel life a-new! Great poem to make me think Angel,,,,your right on the mind here,wink,lol

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/05/08 05:31 AM
I agree....such beautiful words. I love when I can feel what's been written Ty puffins...doesn't get better than that

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/05/08 05:33 AM
With-in you I feel complete. As your warmth surrounds me like a sheet. I feel and see your inner space completely open and gazed upon your face. This time shared is so unfolding wrapped together longing and holding. With-you life is felt so true. And with-in you, I feel life a-new! Great poem to make me think Angel,,,,your right on the mind here,wink,lol (((Terry)))

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Sat 07/05/08 07:16 AM
NICE AND DEDICATED WORDING My Love, I burn for you, yearn for you, turn to you in my most difficult and sweetest moments. Through your Love I am sanctified, knowing myself wholly. In your Love I am wrapped in the warmth of the sun, needing nothing more than this cloak of protection, this cloak of affection. By your Love I arrive where I am destined to be more alive. In you I thrive. I have peace of mind. I find true Love… Passion, Compassion. Yes, a heavenly mansion. With you I bloom, I become.... JDS 07/04/08

sam53 Joined Wed 03/12/08 Posts: 2073	Sat 07/05/08 07:18 AM
Very nice . Please continue ....!. .

sam53 Joined Wed 03/12/08 Posts: 2073	Sat 07/05/08 07:18 AM
Very nice . Please continue ....!. .

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/05/08 07:38 AM
Ty Frank Ty Sam , It's nice to meet you....

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 07/05/08 01:01 PM
With you I bloom, I become.... For all Eternity Humble how love is meant to be, thanks for the lesson and reminder...quite beautiful sentiments

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/05/08 04:56 PM
Thank you pkd... and, hey there now, did you just get your hair done? ....lol....the colour looks great!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 07/05/08 06:54 PM
With you I bloom, I become.... I too love this verse...OH WOW...love is grand when you feel this kind of expression. That was beautiful.

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sun 07/06/08 04:42 AM
awww, Angel, beautiful as always...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 07/06/08 06:07 AM
awww, Angel, beautiful as always... Ty (((Robert))), as always Thank you too Daniel Btw, great new pic...