Topic: If She
elwoodsully's photo
Mon 06/23/08 01:38 AM
If She gives me a chance,
I will show her my world.

If She lets me in,
I want to see hers.

If She will listen closely,
she will hear my smiles.

If She reads between the lines,
she will see my truths.

If She stumbles,
I will catch her.

If She opens her heart,
she will never regret it.

If She tells me something,
I will keep it in my heart.

If She wants me
she need not go searching.

If She is hurting,
she knows I'll cry too.

If She falters,
I will run to console her.

If She needs a hug,
I will drop all to do that.

If She smiles,
it lightens my world.

If She is scared,
I will hold her all night.

If She needs to talk,
I will always listen.

If She only knew
how much I can, and will.

If She
If She
If She

If WE.

flowerforyou (She)

brooke007's photo
Mon 06/23/08 01:39 AM
very sweet
flowerforyou flowerforyou

elwoodsully's photo
Mon 06/23/08 09:34 AM
Thanks, Brooke
backatya flowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Mon 06/23/08 09:49 AM
I especially like the way you ended the piece... very unique.

"If She only knew
how much I can, and will.

If She
If She
If She

If WE."


flowerforyou flowerforyou

elwoodsully's photo
Mon 06/23/08 10:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words, Angel. I left it open on purpose for both reader's interpretation, and for hers.

hikerchick's photo
Mon 06/23/08 10:09 AM
"she" is one lucky chick.flowerforyou

elwoodsully's photo
Mon 06/23/08 10:10 AM
Thanks, Gurl. No, I'm the lucky one.

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 06/23/08 10:20 AM
I think you got all the "If She's" covered. Nice write.

elwoodsully's photo
Mon 06/23/08 10:33 AM
Thanks, Wolf.

d4tc's photo
Mon 06/23/08 11:39 AM
To everything you stated! drinker drinker


Nice man.

no photo
Mon 06/23/08 11:41 AM
very sweet, best to you both.flowerforyou flowerforyou

elwoodsully's photo
Mon 06/23/08 12:32 PM
Thanks, d4, and pkd

mteagle31's photo
Mon 06/23/08 01:18 PM
nice write!!drinker

elwoodsully's photo
Mon 06/23/08 01:52 PM
Thanks, Cowboy(?)..lol

ElaineSeekingJerry's photo
Mon 06/23/08 02:15 PM
Edited by ElaineSeekingJerry on Mon 06/23/08 02:17 PM
... luckIEST girl ever :wink:

elwoodsully's photo
Mon 06/23/08 02:20 PM
Thanks,P

calmguy3's photo
Tue 06/24/08 03:13 AM
you sound like a keeper.


nice one:smile: