Topic: final thoughts
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Sun 02/25/07 10:42 PM

in a few moments i find my strength
hidden at the very end of me
letting down all my safe guards
i allow that essence to flow free

i explode through great buildings
that now support my weight
i am risen above rooftop and mountain
pass the clouds to meet my fate

i expand so far so quickly
that i have lost all form of cohesion
beyond atmospheres i once needed
beyond the solar regions

till i am no longer complete
my molecules light years apart
the fabric of time is now my blood
the great black holes now feed my heart

celestial bodies pass between my fingers
my thighs my shoulders my brain
the knowledge indescribable
the feeling some unknown pain

so massive i have now grown
that the universe pales in size
i am struck with the sudden notion
that a trillion more such lay outside

and they all are held together by me
i remake what once was torn
a billion trillion universes now make one atom
and from this i am born

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Sun 02/25/07 10:47 PM
Intense and beautiful yet haunting...fantastic piece poeticwolf

catchme_ifucan's photo
Sun 02/25/07 11:25 PM
awesome! ^j^

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 02/26/07 05:11 AM
Another good one.

venusrose's photo
Mon 02/26/07 05:39 AM
another incredible poem...very interesting thoughts.

karmafury's photo
Mon 02/26/07 05:40 AM
WoW! Great piece Poeticwolf.

LAMom's photo
Mon 02/26/07 07:05 AM
Incredible !!!