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Topic: Ripples in the pond
2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sat 06/14/08 08:31 AM
You came to this place you made ripples in the pond you turned the heads of everyone but now you are gone Without a goodbye not even a word you just vanished without being heard Maybe you were hurting maybe you thought no one saw maybe you thought that you didn't really belong at all I wish I could have done more because my heart is heavy now I wish I could have found a better way to help you somehow All I can do is hope these words you will see because I want you to know how much your friendship means to me By Daniel 06/14/08

wildsideof35 Joined Sat 08/04/07 Posts: 2189	Sat 06/14/08 08:33 AM


smiless Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13765	Sat 06/14/08 08:34 AM
You came to this place you made ripples in the pond you turned the heads of everyone but now you are gone Without a goodbye not even a word you just vanished without being heard Maybe you were hurting maybe you thought no one saw maybe you thought that you didn't really belong at all I wish I could have done more because my heart is heavy now I wish I could have found a better way to help you somehow All I can do is hope these words you will see because I want you to know how much your friendship means to me By Daniel 06/14/08 Again Brilliant work! You should get everything in one book and publish it if you haven't already. It will be a success!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 06/14/08 09:47 AM
(((Daniel)))

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Sat 06/14/08 12:52 PM
nice

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sat 06/14/08 01:39 PM
Jimmy, MsTeddy, smiless, wildside.. thank you, glad all of you enjoyed it..

brooke007 Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 5469	Sat 06/14/08 01:43 PM


2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sun 06/15/08 02:31 AM
brook...

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 06/15/08 02:34 AM
Very hard to lose a friend who never said goodbye. GREAT POEM DANIEL

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sun 06/15/08 02:53 AM
Yes it is.. Thank you Terry..

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 06/16/08 12:09 PM
Hope she sees it Daniel... Nice write for a friend.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/16/08 01:30 PM
That is truly a beautiful sentiment Daniel. Lucky are the ones who are befriended by you

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Mon 06/16/08 01:33 PM
This is GREAT! Well done my friend!!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/16/08 05:44 PM
Thank you Vicki Angel, Thank you, really though, I am nobody special.. just me.. thank you for the compliment though.. Thank you my friend eagle..

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