Topic: Ripples in the pond
2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 06/14/08 08:31 AM

You came to this place
you made ripples in the pond
you turned the heads of everyone
but now you are gone

Without a goodbye
not even a word
you just vanished
without being heard

Maybe you were hurting
maybe you thought no one saw
maybe you thought that you
didn't really belong at all

I wish I could have done more
because my heart is heavy now
I wish I could have found a better way
to help you somehow

All I can do is hope
these words you will see
because I want you to know
how much your friendship means to me

By Daniel
06/14/08

wildsideof35's photo
Sat 06/14/08 08:33 AM
:heart: :heart: :heart:

no photo
Sat 06/14/08 08:34 AM


You came to this place
you made ripples in the pond
you turned the heads of everyone
but now you are gone

Without a goodbye
not even a word
you just vanished
without being heard

Maybe you were hurting
maybe you thought no one saw
maybe you thought that you
didn't really belong at all

I wish I could have done more
because my heart is heavy now
I wish I could have found a better way
to help you somehow

All I can do is hope
these words you will see
because I want you to know
how much your friendship means to me

By Daniel
06/14/08


Again Brilliant work! You should get everything in one book and publish it if you haven't already. It will be a success!happy

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 06/14/08 09:47 AM
(((Daniel))) flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sat 06/14/08 12:52 PM
flowerforyou nice

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 06/14/08 01:39 PM
Jimmy, MsTeddy, smiless, wildside.. thank you, glad all of you enjoyed it..:heart: flowerforyou drinker

brooke007's photo
Sat 06/14/08 01:43 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 06/15/08 02:31 AM
brook...:heart: flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 06/15/08 02:34 AM
Very hard to lose a friend who never said goodbye.
GREAT POEM DANIELdrinker drinker

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 06/15/08 02:53 AM
Yes it is.. Thank you Terry..drinker drinker

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 06/16/08 12:09 PM
Hope she sees it Daniel... Nice write for a friend.flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Mon 06/16/08 01:30 PM
That is truly a beautiful sentiment Daniel.

Lucky are the ones who are befriended by you :heart:

mteagle31's photo
Mon 06/16/08 01:33 PM
This is GREAT! Well done my friend!!drinker drinker

2Btrue2One's photo
Mon 06/16/08 05:44 PM
Thank you Vickidrinker

Angel, Thank you, really though, I am nobody special.. just me.. thank you for the compliment though..flowerforyou :heart:

Thank you my friend eagle..drinker drinker