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these knots of me undone what shouldn't be undone our story see undone unholy free the witness lived tribute to the brave who died the coward's way the dead who bled the suicide in the empty hallway classrooms silent now books closed the safe of knowledge uncracked dusty undisturbed mysteries unrevealed closed eyes in a silent room scent only disinfectant vacancy of impression imperfect isolation so this is painless what never happened did not occur not even in imagination not oddly in experience how will you make this nothing disappear from within me when we cannot touch any longer when one of us or both are gone away |
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hello noel and sunny ty for reading |
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No prob hun, it was touching
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undone these knots of me undone what shouldn't be undone our story see undone unholy free the witness lived tribute to the brave who died the coward's way the dead who bled the suicide in the empty hallway classrooms silent now books closed the safe of knowledge uncracked dusty undisturbed mysteries unrevealed closed eyes in a silent room scent only disinfectant vacancy of impression imperfect isolation so this is painless what never happened did not occur not even in imagination not oddly in experience how will you make this nothing disappear from within me when we cannot touch any longer when one of us or both are gone away Well Henry (grin) I've read this one several times, and each time have read something new into it. Excellent, emotionally brutal and well written. 
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Have to agree with Alicia this one is really thought provoking!
What a raw write!
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and then one more
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