Topic: the true devil
jimz's photo
Thu 06/12/08 12:44 PM
Edited by jimz on Thu 06/12/08 12:45 PM
the red face of man
the true devil
his guns and kicking legs
his eye bommbs and sore muscles
the true devil
his fake love and wired h*te
and his greed like hail
falling from the sun
the true devil

the ironing board
of the paper land
the true hell

the iron pushed by
clothed souls
while their bloood
is boiling

true sin

inside the metal
skin of man

there is a world

man inside his
own world
but he does not know
how he got there

behind his evil
he watches
the silent void
that writes his lie
or else he would die
a true devil
inside a hell
where he possesses
himself

kc0003's photo
Thu 06/12/08 12:47 PM
well done jim

smokin

jimz's photo
Thu 06/12/08 12:48 PM

well done jim

smokin


whats up bro
peace

Dangerous_Kitchen's photo
Thu 06/12/08 12:49 PM
drinker nice one jimdrinker

kc0003's photo
Thu 06/12/08 12:49 PM
not much
back from my trip to LA trying to get caught up

d4tc's photo
Thu 06/12/08 12:59 PM
This is Deep! bigsmile drinker

no photo
Thu 06/12/08 01:21 PM
So many wonderful lines in here Jimmy. Couldn't just pick a favorite. Count me as a fan.flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 06/12/08 01:22 PM

This is Deep! bigsmile drinker


DITTO!!!drinker

s1owhand's photo
Thu 06/12/08 01:41 PM
devil

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 06/12/08 02:49 PM
(((jimmy)))
flowerforyou devil

jimz's photo
Thu 06/12/08 03:20 PM
Edited by jimz on Thu 06/12/08 03:32 PM

(((jimmy)))
flowerforyou devil


i'm not looking at s1owhand,s
devil face
i'm looking at susans
i mean ms teddybear,s devil face
nice to see you my friend