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You're wrapped up
in your covered shell. You can't get out, yes, I can tell. Years ago, it was your heart that fell and now you live in a lonely hell. I couldn't save you, no matter how I tried; you chose to live in wrapped up lies. I can only hear your deafening sigh, as I struggle to finally say goodbye. Sometimes life is wrought with pain, but Love is stronger and we gain. To touch a rose, you do strain. My prayers go with you, all the same. Sometimes to Love we must let go of everything we used to know. How I wished you would grow. My blood has fallen making crimson snow. JDS 06/11/08 |
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Wisdom, words to live by. Thank you.
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Quite beautiful and sad. Fears can paralyze and allow one not to reach out. Such a loss.
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Awww Angel my dear, I am feeling sadness here lately. I hope everything is okay? I'm still here.
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Wisdom, words to live by. Thank you. You're welcome bb...ty for reading. |
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Quite beautiful and sad. Fears can paralyze and allow one not to reach out. Such a loss.
Yes pkd, you're right...ty for your thoughtful comments.
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Awww Angel my dear, I am feeling sadness here lately. I hope everything is okay? I'm still here.
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You can't teach those who're caged in boxes with thier school of thought, excellent write though, Angel
You're wrapped up in your covered shell. You can't get out, yes, I can tell. Years ago, it was your heart that fell and now you live in a lonely hell. I couldn't save you, no matter how I tried; you chose to live in wrapped up lies. I can only hear your deafening sigh, as I struggle to finally say goodbye. Sometimes life is wrought with pain, but Love is stronger and we gain. To touch a rose, you do strain. My prayers go with you, all the same. Sometimes to Love we must let go of everything we used to know. How I wished you would grow. My blood has fallen making crimson snow. JDS 06/11/08 |
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Thanks for your input Frank
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very very nice angel
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Ty for the love kc and MsTeddy
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Picturesque~ Again an Inspiration
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Picturesque~ Again an Inspiration
Ty {{{{feisty}}}}
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