Topic: inside a heart
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Tue 06/10/08 11:00 AM
Inside a Heart

All because I wanted to know,
The eternal mystery…what causes it to THINK,
All because I wanted the glory
(thousands of words have been shed to no avail),
All because the soul cannot be held in a hand,
Like a heart can.

Pulling it free from its web of life,
Feeling it gasp for breath, though it cannot breathe,
Smelling the warm brine of blood,
Watching it slowing to a dead rest on my fingertips.
Two deaths in one—a body separated from its pump.
I have a sneaking suspicion: the soul plays evil games.

Who’s to say, does a heart feel greater pain,
longing to be loved
or reeling from a love that has gone?
The soul keeps a distinct identity
Much Longer
Than the most stubborn heart can bleed.

And always trumping this game,
causes strain in the human psyche to mourn
the death of a Heart, much longer than the release of a Soul.

pkh's photo
Tue 06/10/08 12:00 PM
flowerforyou very nice write, and welcome

AngelLight's photo
Tue 06/10/08 12:27 PM
Welcome and Ty for your write gashly flowerforyou

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Tue 06/10/08 04:33 PM
Welcome! flowerforyou

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Tue 06/10/08 05:28 PM
aww shucks, thank you all :smile:

jimz's photo
Tue 06/10/08 05:28 PM
Wow!