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2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/09/08 04:24 AM Edited by 2Btrue2One on Mon 06/09/08 04:41 AM
If I look at you will you look at me will you stop for a while and tell me what you see If I gave you a smile would you come over and talk would it be alright for us to go for a walk If I was hurting would you be able to see my pain would you extend a loving hand a gesture to say everything will be ok If I really needed someone to talk to could you really look deep enough to see would you just take the time to stop and for a while, talk with me By Daniel 06/09/08

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 06/09/08 04:36 AM


2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/09/08 04:41 AM
Thanks mirror

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Mon 06/09/08 04:48 AM
NICE WRITE If I look at you will you look at me will you stop for a while and tell me what you see If I gave you a smile would you come over and talk would it be alright for us to go for a walk If I was hurting would you be able to see my pain would you extend a loving hand a gesture to say everything will be ok If I really needed someone to talk to could you really look deep enough to see would you just take the time to stop and for a while, talk with me By Daniel 06/09/08

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/09/08 04:50 AM
Thanks Frank...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/09/08 06:18 AM
Deeply touching

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 06/09/08 08:44 AM


2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/09/08 08:56 AM
Thank you Angel, MsTeddy..

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d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 06/09/08 01:12 PM
Great Write!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/09/08 03:16 PM
Thank you d4tc..

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Mon 06/09/08 03:25 PM
Very nice!! I would do those things anyway!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/09/08 04:42 PM
Thank you Red..

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2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/09/08 04:55 PM
Brook

crushedagn Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 116	Mon 06/09/08 05:08 PM
I heard your pain, over and over, and over, and over, and over..... Nice poem

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/09/08 05:18 PM Edited by 2Btrue2One on Mon 06/09/08 05:19 PM
That many times eh.. thank you

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2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/09/08 05:25 PM
Nice to see you in here Tammy, thank you

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 06/09/08 08:33 PM
If I look at you will you look at me will you stop for a while and tell me what you see If I gave you a smile would you come over and talk would it be alright for us to go for a walk If I was hurting would you be able to see my pain would you extend a loving hand a gesture to say everything will be ok If I really needed someone to talk to could you really look deep enough to see would you just take the time to stop and for a while, talk with me By Daniel 06/09/08 If we all say yes, will you be able to handle this lot of friends?

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