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2Btrue2One
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Mon 06/09/08 04:41 AM
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If I look at you
will you look at me will you stop for a while and tell me what you see If I gave you a smile would you come over and talk would it be alright for us to go for a walk If I was hurting would you be able to see my pain would you extend a loving hand a gesture to say everything will be ok If I really needed someone to talk to could you really look deep enough to see would you just take the time to stop and for a while, talk with me By Daniel 06/09/08 |
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Thanks mirror
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NICE WRITE
If I look at you will you look at me will you stop for a while and tell me what you see If I gave you a smile would you come over and talk would it be alright for us to go for a walk If I was hurting would you be able to see my pain would you extend a loving hand a gesture to say everything will be ok If I really needed someone to talk to could you really look deep enough to see would you just take the time to stop and for a while, talk with me By Daniel 06/09/08 |
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Thanks Frank...
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Deeply touching
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Thank you Angel, MsTeddy..
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Great Write!
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Thank you d4tc..
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Very nice!! I would do those things anyway!
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Thank you Red..
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Brook
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I heard your pain, over and over, and over, and over, and over.....
 
Nice poem |
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Edited by
2Btrue2One
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Mon 06/09/08 05:19 PM
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That many times eh.. thank you
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Nice to see you in here Tammy, thank you
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If I look at you will you look at me will you stop for a while and tell me what you see If I gave you a smile would you come over and talk would it be alright for us to go for a walk If I was hurting would you be able to see my pain would you extend a loving hand a gesture to say everything will be ok If I really needed someone to talk to could you really look deep enough to see would you just take the time to stop and for a while, talk with me By Daniel 06/09/08 If we all say yes, will you be able to handle this lot of friends?
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