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Topic: Riddle
rarerose's photo
Tue 02/20/07 07:11 PM
What rises and falls
Has a lover,
But neither can see eachother?

rarerose's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:02 PM
no one has even a guess...its really not that hard...think of two things
that go together but usually are not seen together.
We encounter their seperation every day.

DANE1973's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:05 PM
The sun and moon ,any others?

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:05 PM
the sun,and the moon?

lionsbrew's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:06 PM
sun and moon?

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:08 PM
a woman's breasts?

rarerose's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:08 PM
Very very good to all

rarerose's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:08 PM
except michael

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:12 PM
whitch guess?
they both fit the riddle:wink:

DANE1973's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:13 PM
I have one I don't discriminate I fell both tree and man,Both have died
from my Iron hand what am I?

rarerose's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:14 PM
As I stare at the bright night sky
I see a wonderous sight
shooting stars and constilations
to last me all night

As I glare at the big bright moon
It seems as if he cries
flowing down his round round face
to the never ending sky

I ask the mighty moon
"What causes thee to cry?"
and thus came a shocking answer
told to me that night

"It tis my love,
the shining sun.
who seems to
evade my sight."

"She rises after night
as I do after day
and every time I show myself
she has already gone away."

I reply "Do not cry my mighty moon
for I have seen your light!
Your luminous face is lite
by your lovers love everynight."

"She does not hide,
but waits for the day,
she to can see her lover
which lights the night sky."

From then I watched
as the moon glew his brightest
then watched as the lovers past
Day and night, night and day.

copywrite 2006 Krystle McGee

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:15 PM
axe

DANE1973's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:19 PM
Damn got it already. Good poem by the way thanks for posting.

venusrose's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:24 PM
very good poem!flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/20/07 10:25 PM
WoW!!!

nice poem!flowerforyou

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 02/21/07 10:55 AM
Awesome...Really great...
Thanks for sharing that...
and the riddle too...
flowerforyou flowerforyou

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 02/21/07 06:37 PM
Nice riddle, however the Poem is great. I hope to see more of your work.

flowerforyou flowerforyou bigsmile

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DANE1973's photo
Wed 02/21/07 06:42 PM
It wasn't her work Gryph, but if she's going to keep posting like this,
I'd be happy.

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 02/21/07 06:48 PM
Thanks for the info Dane.bigsmile

Hotchikita's photo
Wed 02/21/07 06:52 PM
nice sharing of work.Ialways love to read a good poem.Keep posting

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